A Royal Solution

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Princess Celestia has an idea to help tie up one of the loose ends leftover from her and Luna's friendship problem. But she's going to need Luna's help.

Warning: contains lots of hugs!

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Lilli Loves Autumn

Lilli Loves Autumn #1 · Dec 12th, 2017 · 3 · · Solution ·

Awesome story!
Idk how much 9 bits is in Euros, but broke college student me would definitely save up for this.

Baddamobs

Baddamobs #2 · Dec 12th, 2017 · 1 · · Solution ·

That was positively adorable, and super great overall.

I appreciate that, under just the sheer cute Image of these two doing something like this, you do keep a focus on how this reflects on Celestia and Luna. Both have pitch perfect characterisation, with both being caring and nurturing, and Luna's nostalgic thoughts to their past feels perfectly in character. Also, that final hug is stellar in every which way.

And yea, I reckon I'd pay good money to hug the princesses as well, lol.

If I had to make a criticism, I would say that maybe there was a missed opportunity to show a difference in style from each sister to how they would approach this situation. It would probably be pretty superfluous, but it might have been neat to see if Celestia's style of nurturing was any different to Luna's.

But overall, great work!

Grand Prize

Grand Prize #3 · Dec 13th, 2017 · 1 · · Solution ·

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IKR?

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Thanks so much for your comment. So glad you enjoyed it!

MixMassBasher

MixMassBasher #4 · Dec 13th, 2017 · 1 · · Solution ·

Look forward to more! The first chapter seemed very well done!

MixMassBasher

MixMassBasher #5 · Jan 8th, 2018 · 1 · · Toward a Brighter Future ·

A cute little conclusion. Look forward to the sequel!

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Grand Prize #6 · Jan 9th, 2018 · · · Toward a Brighter Future ·

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Thank you!! I'll try to make it even better than this one

Dusky Flare

Dusky Flare #7 · Jan 15th, 2018 · 1 · · Toward a Brighter Future ·

Read it, loved it!
The sisters reconciling is as heart warming as ever.
And with Luna doing princess duty in this way I even shed a tear.

Well done! Waiting for more!

Dusky

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Grand Prize #8 · Jan 17th, 2018 · · · Toward a Brighter Future ·

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So happy to hear you liked it, and thanks for the kind words!! I really want to make the sequel something special. Hope it doesn't disappoint

pitter_patter

pitter_patter #9 · Feb 25th, 2018 · 1 · · Toward a Brighter Future ·

This was adorable <3 Can't wait for the sequel!

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Grand Prize #10 · Mar 3rd, 2018 · · · Toward a Brighter Future ·

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Thank you! It might take a while, but it will happen ...

Also, thanks for faving!

Jubilee Bloom

Jubilee Bloom #11 · Jul 13th, 2018 · 1 · · Toward a Brighter Future ·

This was the first story I ever read on Fimfiction, months before I even got my account. This is a wonderful story that I have reread multiple times. (I even had the entire first chapter memorized at one point.) I’m a sucker for anything cute with the royal sisters. Seriously. Or anything sappy/sentimental at all.

The only criticism I have is a common grammatical error in the first sentence; it should be “lay”, not “lie.”

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Grand Prize #12 · Jul 14th, 2018 · 1 · · Toward a Brighter Future ·

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I even had the entire first chapter memorized at one point.

Wow! A writer can't hope for a much better response than that! Very happy that you liked it so much And right you are about 'lay'. Fixed!

Thanks for faving too

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Grand Prize #13 · Feb 15th, 2019 · · · Toward a Brighter Future ·

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Thanks!! Glad you liked it!

EveningNight

EveningNight #14 · Jul 18th, 2020 · 1 · · Toward a Brighter Future ·

I loved this fic
And the sequel?

Uz Naimat

Uz Naimat #15 · Sep 1st, 2021 · · · Toward a Brighter Future ·

This is gorgeous! The way you described the hugs was absolutely golden. Reminds me if Dad’s wonderful hugs, which us why I may have shed a few tears during this story. Have an upvote, a fave and heart!

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