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Imprisoned

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Fluttershy is kidnapped and trapped within a tree. She must find out what her kidnappers want with her and find a way to escape.

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thetrapezoid

thetrapezoid #1 · Jul 20th, 2012 · · ·

Thanks to my friend Will for editing this.

Revenant Wings

Revenant Wings #2 · Jul 21st, 2012 · · ·

The story itself is well-written and interesting, in addition to keeping with the character's canon personalities. The only thing I have to say is change the title; I know there's the whole joke with Fluttershy wanting to be a tree but that may be a little misleading if someone thinks that is part of the story when what you have here is a bit darker. Try to keep along the imprisonment lines, but make the title a little more appropriate for the mood of the story.

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