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Your weird, german Nerd || Something, Something, Dragonmaids

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It's photo-day for the Wonderbolts and because everyone knows how important this is for Captain Spitfire, they are well-prepared and approach it in a calm and rational manner to avoid causing problems...

Of course not.

Chaos and madness follow these ponies as they struggle to maintain their sanity to prevent a bigger disaster during the three hours leading up to the photo.


Written for Mana's Wonderful Wonderbolts Writing Contest

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Comments ( 7 )

Time's messed up.

This was really good and funny at the same time.

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If you mean 12 pm instead of am, I fixed it.:twilightsheepish:

I wasn't worried about Photo for a second, I knew she would have some sort of dramatic exit.

“That’s why I’m your favourite.”

“You aren’t.”

This was my favourite line :pinkiehappy:

Enjoyably goofy little farce, though the depilatory desserts kept switching back and forth between pie and cake. Still, thank you for this.

I would give ANYTHING if this were made into a short animation, this is too good :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

The 'dramatic' encounter of Soarin and Surprise that turns into a sudden impromptu psychology session is my favorite part. I'm really thinking that Surprise is actually Pinkie in disguise :pinkiesmile:

And, I did not expect the feels in the end, and the background story of Spitfire wanting to have a perfect photo. I thought this fic is purely comedic, but it's a really nice touch. I give this fic a 10/10 in 10 seconds flat. :rainbowkiss:

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