This story is a sequel to Kamen Rider Unicorn
In this Hyper Battle Edition of "Kamen Rider Unicorn", Sunset Shimmer and Rainbow Dash have been working tirelessly as Kamen Riders Unicorn and Nasca to defend their home from the ever-increasing threat brought about by the arrival of the Gaia Memories, strange USB shaped devices capable of transforming the user into a terrifying monster called a Dopant.
However, when a new Dopant surfaces, stronger than anything they've ever faced before, will our heroes be able to summon the strength to vanquish this beast, or will Canterlot be razed to the ground?
"Time to restore Harmony!"
Chapters (5)
Is it not the Quetzalcoatlus memory?
Dude, it's like you're in my head, and I love it!
Even the cute SunLight moments! So cute.
Keep up the good work, I look forward to more.
O hai GokaiRed.
THIS IS SO COOL! I love reading this stuff! And I can't wait to see what form you come up with for Unicorn and/or Nazca to use!
Spoiled Rich? Or someone worse?
Don't fight like you're powerful, fight like you are weak. If you fight like you are powerful, you tend to place faith in your power, and are thus more careless. If you fight like you are weak, then you are more cautious, and are less likely to make mistakes since they could mean your end.
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Definitely sounds like Spoiled Rich.
BTW, I need to say this. Usually during Hyper Battle Videos, the special would have an exclusive item/transformation. Usually, the content/plot is humorous in nature. Finally, a brief review of Riders and their gear.
Are you going to use these?
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As for everything else, I'm trying to inject bits of humor where I can, like with the scene with the Engine Blade, but this won't be strictly comedy. As for a review of the Rider's and their powers, not really. The closest thing is making sure each form get's a chance to shine rather than a detailed info dump.
Oh, there will be an exclusive form, make no mistake.
You just had to end it at a cliffhanger! So, who's our suspect? Who has the Q Gaia Memory? Also, I feel sorry for DT. I used to think she was a bully, but then we see her mother.
I actually had an idea of decades in the future, Diamond visits her mom in a retirement home. Basically, DT betrays her mom and leaves her with nothing. DT merely says this.
"Oh, mother. I merely did everything you taught me. You were just too good of a teacher."
Hah! Those constructs just "Nope"d right out of there after seeing that! Love it!
8621722 I thought it was heavily implied that Spoiled Rich was the possessor of the Quetzalcoatlus Memory. God knows she has the personality to match it.
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Yeah, but it may not be all that obvious.
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I know. Which is why if it is her, I would be both happy that I am correct, and disappointed that it was so obvious. Given how the author's profile pic is literally a Kamen Rider, however, I think that it won't be that obvious.
I have a feeling that Spoiled is a red herring. It’s too easy to make her the villain with the Quetzalcoatlus Memory. Part of me wants to think it’s Trixie, but she’s completely irrelevant to the story as of yet. Good job keeping the mystery alive.
The plot thickens and I like it.
Edit: Forgot to mention that I loved that bit with the Engine Blade, reminded me when Thor was waiting for Mjolnir to arrive after he called for it. Also, you captured Sunset's tactical approach to battle to a T.
Oh this going to be good.
While I wouldn't be the least bit surprised if Spoiled is behind this, what I don't know yet is her motive...
That....that's too much badass! Especially when you start listening to this in your head when Sunset goes "Hell no!": https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cnx4ZdNR9x0
Yeah, that's a good reason to not add the "Mystery" tag. From the first scene with Diamond after the first Quetzalcoatlus attack, it was pretty obvious.
In other news:
🎼~ I spy a reference! ~🎼
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Considering that Michael Ravencroft based Kamen Rider Unicorn after the Kamen Rider W series, and that one of the catchphrases for the series was "We are the two-in-one Kamen Rider! it makes sense that music from that series would fit.
I think the only thing that would’ve made this better would’ve been dramatic pointing in the healing of OBJECTION! During the court scene.
Since this is non-canon, how about Sunset and Rainbow meet Shotaro and Phillip? I dunno how to make it happen, though, bur I am sure you can figure it out.
Well we have our Hyper Battle form and it seems awesome!
Also I love how the judge let Unicorn take the stand wish more members of the legal system were more supporting of superheroes it would make life for both parties so much easier
I have a question. How likely is it for Shining Armor to become a Kamen Rider to go after Nazca and Unicorn? Also, what would he do if he learns Twilight was involved?
Yeah, like you could do better. Didn't your people label the Quetzalcoatlus Memory "too unstable for use"?
I know this isn't canon to the main story, but Celestia damn-it, it should be!
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You would have to ask this guy/girl about that, as they are the one writing the main story.
THAT was fun. And I hope that at least this HBV is canon to the main fic, because it'd be AWESOME to see Nazca Cross again.
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You'd have to ask the original fic author that question.
into a wide-barreled grenade launcher..
1. Just an extra full stop.
was a tire connected to a pair of spokes. ,
[ b]“Rainbow!” she cried out
Stepping into the centre of her room
1. Extra comma.
2. Broken caption. The space I added cause otherwise it would bold everything else.
3. Center, I believe is more fitting.
Regardless of how 'non-canon' you think this is, I am dead certain Michael_Ravencroft will make multiple callbacks to this, thus proving its true canonical nature.
“She’d never want to be friends with someone like me…
You mother and I have been combing the city
You cur! You lead Unicorn right to me
1. Forgot your closing quotation mark.
2. Your.
3. Led.
I wanting to make sure more than anything
“Right! Thanks!” Pulling out a green Gaia Memory, Unicorn slotted it into her left hip port. - forgot to colour text.
You father is currently being transported to a hospital to have his injuries treated
1. Wanted.
2. Forgot to colour Unicorns text.
3. Your.
Time to bale?Rainbow asked
1. Bail.
Oh Sunset, if you thought sharing minds with Rainbow was hard for a moment you should meet your predecessor. Or rather, have Twilight look up Karen Rider Double if she can... To which I think it should be since canon Accel memory had a little shout out to the previous user.
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That would be a great fic.
I'm guessing the dopant is Spoild Rich
Is Rainbow fighting a Dopant or Natsu Dragneel
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A dopant.
Took awhile to binge read, but it was worth it & just in time before the finale of the main story arc too.
Little LATE, don't you think?