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Law Abiding Pony


Just a hobbyist writer with aspirations of making a career in it.

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This story is a sequel to Reformation of the Hives


Even though the threat of the jungle queens and Grogar have been diminished, life often times does not get wrapped up in a neat little bow. More troubles present themselves large and small. Our only hope is we keep passing life's constant tests, even when it is the last thing we wish to do.

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Comments ( 53 )

And it rears its bug-like head again! :pinkiesmile:

Um, you mispelled 'Prologue' there...

I usually don't catch LAP stories before they hit the front page. Good thing I did this time!

Dammit... Why did you have to make it a sad chapter, now that I was happy with it appearing :fluttershysad:
But it's still a nice beginning. Gives us a feeling of what's to come.

The wait is over!

whats with the time skip

WOO! Been waiting for this! Cant wait to see what our favorite Queens have been up to.

YAS ITS BACK!

Oh, how happy I am to see this. A wonderfully early Christmas present. Thank you so much!

Your birthday present to me is three days late!
...

Who the fuck am I kidding, THIS IS AWESOME!

Stories like these remind me of why I used to like writing.

Added to favorites because we all know this is going to be epic.

holy crap it's back finally!!!!
quickly we need chapters!!!! but considering...
Well I may be able to wait, but it will be interesting to see what will happen in this one!

How big is that time skip? It would seem it's at least some twenty years, if not longer.
It could also be all part of velvet's treatment, but I doubt it.

Either way, nice to see more of this :twilightsmile:

FINNNNNAAALLLLLLYYYYY!

OHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSHOHMYGOSH

I am so excited for this! I love this series!

All aboard the feels train!

Yay! My favorite series is back baby!

Been waiting for this, just don't make us wait too long for the next chapter

Oh man. IT'S BACK :yay: :yay: :yay:

Oh man this story is gonna be heavy on the mystery side of things as you force the readers to dig out the fate of the pre timeskip time bombs! :rainbowkiss:

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It was five days late for me!:derpyderp2:

Huzzah! I'm reading as soon as I get home.

ITS BACK, CALL THE PRESSES! TO THE FRONT PAGE WITH YOU!

I. AM. HYPED!

Meow! 😻

HOLY FLYING FUCK, IT IS BACK!!!

It's back it's back it's BAAAACCKK!

I'm excited. This is gonna be great!

Yes yes yes yes yesyesyesyesyes ALL MY YES.YES

The only people disliking it right now have to have some kind of personal beef with LAP. Either that or they haven't read the first four books and are going "What in the world is going on? I don't understand anything here. Dislike!" What is wrong with you people?! This is just the prologue... and it's book 5! Read the rest of the series first.

This was a fantastic start to a great conclusion to one of the best (and my personal favorite) book series on Fimfiction. I'm greatly looking forward to the rest of it.

YES! THE WAIT IS somewhat OVER! I'm honestly so happy to see this posted and after reading the first chapter I already can't wait for the next update.

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

Err, I mean, this is a very welcome sight, and I look forward to seeing where this go-ohfuckit

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

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Or it's those that have a permanent hate-on for Twilight's mother.

Thank you, so much, for this beginning. I really look forwards to the conclusion of the story. Not just of Velvet's story, but of the whole thing started since book 1.

This is gonna be good...

Bugs bugs bugs!

Day one feature, too. Noticed it last night before falling asleep, but I was too tired at the time to comment on it.

Excellent! New story for the series!

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Yeah. Just because FiM is notorious for redemption arcs (more like heel-face turns than arcs) doesn't mean fimfics can't have them. There is a right way to do a redemption arc, and I think this is being handled very well.

I don't like time skips that are this big, but I am still intrigued for what has yet to come

yes ist back on the stage wooooohooooooo, one of the best Buggsstorys here on Fimfictions

IT
BEGINS
AGAIN

<3

I'm so excited to see this back!! :pinkiehappy:

ONCE MORE UNTO THE BREACH!

Ah! Another one!? What have you done to me!? The obsession is beginning again!

But really, tho... It's finally here! And it starts by putting my concerns to rest! :pinkiehappy:

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