At the height of Overwatch - Talon conflict, a powerful forbidden Equestrian artifact emerged on Earth. As Talon became aware of its existence, Overwatch and Equestrian agents must work together to stop disaster from being unleashed upon the world.
8754032 Toss it into grammarly or something. And use less periods. A good measure is saying it to yourself or a English speaking friend and checking that way.
8711502
Great chapter, as always. I can not wait to see how the story goes on.
So... May I offer some criticism?
8739615
Lets hear it
8739027
Thanks man!
8739892
The flow is kinda choppy, and it's broken up by periods that don't seem to belong there.
8740587
Ah, I see. Perhaps you have a solution for this matter?
8754032
Toss it into grammarly or something. And use less periods. A good measure is saying it to yourself or a English speaking friend and checking that way.
8756245
Thank you very much for the feedback, my friend. I will try my best to apply it in future chapters.
8766263
Np.
We know.