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Rose Quill


Author of the Homecoming series, occasional contributor to Bodyguard!AU, and food aficionado. Please consider joining my Patreon

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Comments ( 6 )

Ah! I love this!

As an avid reader of literature the pace was a bit fast and Twilight being the one to make the move is a bit far fetched but great work here, keep writing!

With lots of Pony Love
-The Wandering Mare.

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Twilight being the one to make the move is a bit far fetched

Hence the title. This is the third of a trio, if you’re interested. :twilightsmile: :raritywink:

What are these Ally? You flipping a coin? The one with Fluttershy is canon to the Homecoming AU, but the others could fit in just as well.

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Four sided die, actually. One where Rarity succeeds in confessing, one where she’s too late, and one where the question was asked before she could.

Fourth was a reroll. :twilightsmile:

Not what I expected, but that's the point isn't?

You, my friend, have earned a like and a follower. :pinkiehappy:

The fact that we shared tastes in many things made everything a bonus when planning get-togethers easier.

This part could be worded better, like, “The fact that we shared tastes in many things was a bonus, as it made planning get-togethers easier.”

Other than that, a nice little story.

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