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Rose Quill

I write short little bits of words that somehow fit together into stories. Nice to meet ya!

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Thought you'd go with fizzle pop at the end. Did you choose tempest because that's what she still identifies as or?

Because at this time, she doesn’t know who she really is. I plan a follow up of her return a few weeks later.


In my opinion, she hasn't been Fizzlepop Berrytwist since shortly after she left Equestria. At the end of the movie, she's confused, I'll agree, but she's Tempest Shadow now. She'll figure that out eventually.

Great job, AK! Can't wait for more.

*atomic squee detected! 5. 4. 3. 2. 1...* SQUEEEEEE!! I love it!! Moar!

This was excellent. Would love to see more.

more more need more

This was realky good. I want to see more of this story please

I love how you incorporated Rainbow into the story (I assumed it was about Twilight and Tempest, too)! :twilightsmile:

“I know a couple of ponies that could help with that,” the princess said with a smile.

In a possible sequel I don't really want to see them forcing their help on Tempest, the CMC I mean. Well only not if it is in the tradiotional chaotic Cutiemark Crussaider sense.
I have not exactly a problem with it, but I wouldn't exactly like it if they would have Tempest get her cutiemark in no time. Somtimes I just don't like quick problem solving in stories.

Well the chapter was nice enough and nice to be honest, I guess I just expected something different.

Tempest goes nowhere.

How's that coming along?

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