"NO! You don't have to do this! Please....I Love you''.
"I will see you again my love.....wait for me"
"Goodbye".
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- Member Since 22nd May, 2012
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bronypanda
just a brony that loves to read. I'm known for my descriptions drawing people's attention and curiosity :)
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WOW that was good I wish I was not in this situaton but I am tough but I almost shed a tear for this but I did not. I just wish that it was me not the actual charicter in the story! I have a new found live for Princess Celestia so sorry if it sounds wierd but I do not want to be dead THIS IS SOO GOOD
very good my friend
my only problem is a minor one.
your capitalization is inconsistent as fuck
oh and you have to start a new paragraph when someone is talking
but other than that i enjoyed this immensely.
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good job!!!
Very well done on this, not often you see stories constructed like this, but you pulled it off!
Keep it up!
Lovely work, your going to want to edit it a bit, there are some things that need a touch up. Though you set the tone of the story wonderfully, I wish you luck on it.