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Robipony


The man, whose work, is greatly under appreciated! For crying out loud, don't just favorite my stories, leave a comment! I want to know why you love my stories... T_T

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Note on Sex Tag: This is merely for a few innuendos, no actual sex happens in the story.

Just a lovely Nightmare Night with Trixie and Filthy Rich sharing each other's company. Sure being a gorgony is difficult but the trick pony has grown used to it and so has her husband. However while the two of them try to enjoy the evening and relax, it would seem that a couple tricksters have other plans.

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This story takes place in my little: Gorgony-Verse, so do keep that in mind while reading this.

It was also proofread and edited by: TheDizzyDan

While I used some prompts given to me in Nailah's Random Contest for December (the prompts being Trixie and Filthy Rich being paired together), I wanted to write something about gorgonies and thought it would be interesting if I turned Trixie into one. :pinkiehappy:

I created the image using GIMP.

If you like the story please give it a thumbs up.

I hope you all enjoy.:twilightsmile:

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Comments ( 7 )

An unusual ship with an unusual circumstance but a sweet dynamic. :rainbowdetermined2:

I just wish people would leave feedback telling me, why they don't like my stories.

I don't know why people would dislike this, even if I didn't know what a Gorgony was, I still liked it. If I had to give constructive criticism, it would be in the section where Trixie remembers how she met Filthy Rich should be in italic, and you should put a flashback warning when you do so. This'll help the story feel a little more cohesive and tell the reader when a character is remembering something and when it stops and not seem sloppy, but if I had anything positive to say about it, is that it was written well, you captured the point of the flashback in a perfectly sweetly quick moment, which I got the feeling that's what you were going for. Other than that, all I found wrong with this story was some comma mistakes, but that's a minor nitpick at best. But yeah, this story is great and if this is how you write, then you earned yourself a follower and I'm excited to read everything else you got.:pinkiehappy:

And I know how you feel, wanting somebody to tell me why they disliked my stories, only one person so far has actually given me some good constructive criticism, but what helps to see why somebody may potentially dislike your story is to read it yourself, once you read it yourself, you may see why.

8625957 thank you for your feedback. I'll have to talk to my editor about the feedback on the flashback. He might have an idea on how to do the warning.

Gorgonies are kind of something I trying to motivate more people to write about. I like the gorgons from greek mythology and I just really like the idea of combining them with ponies. :twilightsmile:

So the pairing didn't bother you? I was worried that was where most of the dislikes were coming from.

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Well, here's the first chapter of one of my stories that contains a flashback, Nomadic Dragon Emperor.

  • , you and your editor can take a look at it, it may help the next time you do a flashback.

I thought the story was a little odd but that doesn't make it bad. It really is well written, minus a few nitpicks. Best of luck with the contest!

8626182 Well technically this was for your contest, so I hope you seeing this doesn't affect anything. :twilightsheepish:

I did say it might get crazy.:rainbowlaugh:

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