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SPark


I dabble in nearly everything. Sometimes that means I write pony stories. I chat about writing and other things on my Discord chat here: https://discord.gg/cz4mjDT


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This story is a sequel to Spring Tide


On an evening warm and fair, Princess Luna comes walking to Twilight's castle, singing as she goes. Twilight, however, is not there to meet her and so Luna believes she's been stood up. Then she discovers that something far more sinsister has happened, for Twilight, picking flowers for a bouquet at the edge of the Everfree, has stepped into a fairy ring on Midsummer's Eve.

(Continuing my habit of basing stories on songs.)

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Comments ( 32 )

I absolutely adored this one. The fae are always a lot of fun, and I'm delighted to see people tapping into old material for them like you have here--and on top of that, it's even TwiLuna, and your TwiLuna in specific, its principles sketched so artfully. Just an absolute delight.

SPark #2 · 1 week ago · · ·

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I had way too much fun writing it. (And took way too long, I had the idea right after Spring Tide came out, but, uh...)

An absolute delight to read. Love me some fae shenanigans.

SPark #4 · 1 week ago · · ·

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Huzzah!

What little there is, I mean.

I loved this fanfic. I can just imagine a Changeling Otherworld populated by lings using any metal but iron.

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Thank you. :twilightsmile:

I'd like to do some future story with Fae changelings.

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Please do! I'd love to see more of them!

how dost this not have more upvotes, I truely do wonder?

Okay, absolutely beautiful... Nothing more to say really.

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I suspect the sequel-ness is slowing things down. I've noticed a lot of folks adding the previous story to their read later lists and such.

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Thank you very much! :twilightsmile:

Well this was a merry read. I sadly am not as familiar with the fae as a person with my ancestry should be but I do delight when they appear in a story. Thank you for the entertaining tale.

Very well done with only a few nit picks, but that's all they are. I'm thinking of starting a you tube chanel that reviews/critiques fan fiction... I may just start withe this one and it's prequel if that's acceptable to you.

Keep up the good work. I can't wait to see what else you come up with.:twilightsmile:

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Thank you!

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Feel free to review it if you like.

Reads... like its complete? Like chunks of the story were cut out without being patched over (that and I haven't read any of your other works). Its obviously a sequel to something else though, since theres a LunaXTwilight relationship.

That said, I have nothing against the story itself but I'm not a fan of fae stories in general. They feel like godpowered-OC characters but are treated as generic monsters that can be beaten if you have X, Y and Z, never mind the fact that X, Y and Z are impossible to obtain on the spot if it wasn't for plot armor.

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It says it's a sequel right there, with the link to the other story and everything.:facehoof:

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I see a story about shipping not that it matters to this story. This story could be about rescuing a random foal it'd be the same.

What I don't see a story about Changelings being fae or celestia and Luna being exwitchers .

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exwitchers

This story is not a video game reference. It is a literary reference. I don't think I have enough facehoof emoticons for this.

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And the literature you're referencing is...?

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:facehoof: If you can't figure it out, are you sure you actually read the story?

8593858 So, you come into the sequel of a story, assuming that the original is unimportant because shipping even though it's possible that some of this worldbuilding might be explained in that story, double down and add in an assumption that this is a video game reference even though literally none of this hints at such, and then can't do a quick look up of the literary reference on your own despite the hint being in the freaking description?

Time to break out the crayons, I guess.

8593874 You come here, onto this, a writing site, and expect me to ... what? Read or something?!

Gtfoh

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Humor me, where in Spring Tide is there a reference to the fae?

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If you can condense about a thousand years of greater European mythology using crayons, I will be genuinely impressed.

8594082 No, the crayons are to draw you a map to the reference within this story alone.

8594084 I think you need a few more.

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Are there length limits to comments? 'Cause I don't think I'd be able to fit the true number needed into one.

8594172 Let's find out.

Comment posted by Carapace deleted December 6th
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