"Some people just need a high five....in the face....with a chair"
One moment Henry was helping his odd friend, the next he was being electrocuted then he blacked out.
Now in a world he doesn't recognize, one full of colorful ponys, he tries to figure out what happened, why hes now a small yellow filly, and how to get back home.
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Hmmmm. Cole is that you?
I kinda hope the lighting is temporary because having a op main charecter isn't fun for me to read
Nice beginning
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Who?
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Thanks
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It's not really op, he can't control it, if anything it's the opposite of op since it does more damage to himself than others when it occurs
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fair enough
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Cole McGrath from the infamous series. It was a reference.
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Oh....yeah I didn't get that, does he have lightning powers?
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Yep
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Ok
10-10 made me daww
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Yeah?
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yea but I do hope that henry embraces his new life as a filly
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Who knows
Awesome
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Thx
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your welcome
bad rainbow get those thoughts out of your head
Ah yes, Celestia with a ladder is quite a terrifying thing.
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Son of a!!!!!
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i look forward to the next chapter
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Somehow your typos make a scene hilarious. Fan-art is now needed of Celestia with a flaming ladder.
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*Sigh*
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I’ve by now hit another of your story’s with a comment. Don’t worry you’ve gotten a lot better with writing since you’re first story, a small typo is a easy fix.
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I should get a proof reader
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There’s a group for that. Somewhere...
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I may try it
well the story is takeing a while to update
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Yeah sorry
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its okay
Why is this story under 'updated' on the front page, but there is no new chapter?
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My guess accidental publish
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Oh, that happened to me once too, that is annoying. At least this guy didn't get death threats for accidentally doing it like got.
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Very true
needs a editor there is a lot of places where the and a are missing
More of this please
A black and yellow dress on a yellow and black pony she must of looked like a bumble bee
Why isn't there an OC tag?
Yikes
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Buzz buzz its spring and summer wear
Hmm.
If there was less Violence, I am not implying that there should be less violence, then this could almost be a slice of life story. Also, did your writing improve a lot in the last two chapters, or is it just my imagination?
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It probably has since I have been more focused and catching my errors better
Update?
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update?
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update?