Big Mac is a wise stallion. Growing up in a house full of mares he had learned that secret language that mares use. Though as good as he is, Rainbow Dash is not like any other mare out there; can he figure out her issue? Hot chocolate and snuggles always seem to help. Join Big Mac as he tries to get to the root of his fillyfriend's problem, or die trying.
Thank you to Arbarano for all the edits!
This is for CategoricalGrant's snuggle contest. I hope I do well, but it was a good challenge to help shake off the rust that has been covering my fingers.
Art belongs to the very talented ArtistCoolPony
Featured 12/1/17
Winner of the CategoricalGrant's snuggle contest.
Chapters (1)
I'm glad you picked this idea rather than Big Mac treating Rainbow. It worked out really well.
This was really great man, you've come a long way!
Her mane is so cute in that pic!
As Significant Other often comments "One of the seldom remarked upon pleasures of sleeping with someone is sleeping with someone..."
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*suit
D'aawwwww, what an adorable little story.
two mares that can easely kill you and still look adorable at the same time, dash and luna
This is one of the better one-shots I've ever seen. Excellent work.
For the final piece of resistance [pièce de résistance]
Through a good chunk of story, I just kept thinking that Rainbow should look to the here and now. The future comes only when you know your present.
This story was amazing. Big Mac seems like such a fit to someone as chaotic and reckless as Dash. Wonderful job!
This did not go to the place I thought it was going to at the start. I thought that maybe Dash was getting made fun of for seeing an Earth Pony. Then when Mac thought about what to say to Dash, I thought he was going to suggest parenthood. I liked this story a lot, it's well written and non of the characters, well, out-of-character. Excuse me while I go probe your channel for a sequel.
Love these heartwarming stories!
I really enjoyed everything about this. :) Nicely done.
Oh, I'm sure you did well~
Congrats on winning our tie for first place! You earned it!
Totally cute and the feels.
Relationship goals. :V
Hey! Lovely story! I never actually considered a Rainbow Mac (Big Dash?) shipping story, it was adorable! Wonderful job!
I must ask; I work with a group of animators and fellow bronies who wish to expand into fanfic readings. We already have one story read for our channel, and I must ask if you would mind if we did a reading of your story? It is an adorable story, and we would be honored to read it on our channel!
Should you not wish to let us read, that is 100% okay, all we would mind is a response. Thanks in advance!
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Who rejects a free reading? Needed a pick me up, thanks! Also the ship is MacDash
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Alrighty! Thanks!
And MacDash, gotcha!
I can’t belive that I haven’t had chance to get online over the break and I missed this being posted!!!!
This would have gone a very different direction if he advised world domination.