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Cum historia, Mutat valde Razgriz, Revelat ipsum, Primum daemon scelestus est

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The war is over.
Cipher and PJ, two mercenaries working for Equestria, have been through a lot, from fighting the best warriors the Griffons could throw at them, to destroying a giant flying warship gunning for Canterlot. But its over. A World with no Boundaries, a group of Griffons who had taken control of the Griffonstone government after the official surrender, vowing to fight to the end for Griffonstones honor, have finally been defeated.

But for Cipher, there is one last fight: an old friend returned from the past to hunt him down.

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Comments ( 9 )

damn it! the feels!

Typos aside, not too shabby. One big error though.

As he hit the ground, Cipher saw the outline of Cipher against the bright light,

You mean he saw the outline of Pixy?

Hello!

I have reviewed your story for the Reviewer Cafe.

https://www.fimfiction.net/group/211585/reviewers-cafe/thread/308771/reviews?page=9#comment/6336623

I hope you find the review to be at least somewhat helpful, and as always, thank you for the time and hard work you put into the creation of this narrative. :twilightsmile:

8762463
Thanks! I've been waiting for you to get to it. ^^
You make some good points, but I feel your understanding of the story would be a little bit better if you watched this, which this story is a ponified version of and done sorta as a writing exercise for myself.
Glad you enjoyed it though!

8762481

I think having to watch something else to get context clues for the story would diminish the appreciation to be had from the story itself. :twilightsheepish:

8762485
Ah, well, just glad you liked it. :twilightsmile:

8762491

There is definitely something to this story, that's for sure. :pinkiehappy:

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