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Dark Nightshade


I like to do occasional crossoves, and I can now draw. Just PM me if you want me to draw or wright something! I'm on Wattpad, check me out: https://www.wattpad.com/user/Dark-Nightshade

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I was expecting something like FISTO.

I read.

It was not something like FISTO.

I am sad.

Everyone else gonna take a turn?

8580159
I don't know what that is.


8580165
Yes.

8580243
Cool I look foreword to it.

So where's the EQ Tag?

8580288
Hehe. No, it's not quite like that.


8580291
I forgot to add that. I'll go do that now.

It had felt good for the first could of orgasms

couple

Twilight pointed at the counsel as best she could

console

But as she finished, she felt her climax achieve, and her juices splatter on the floor, like it had with so many other orgasms. The fake mouth rise away from Twilight's nipple. Sunset Shimmer's blush deepen.

No woman has ever felt her climax achieve. Arrive?

The fake mouth rose away? It moved away?

Sunset felt her blush deepen? Or her blush deepened

"It's almost basically 11:00," she said.

The word - basically - is redundant here. And numbers should be written out as words, not numbers. "It's almost eleven."

"Ok, wow, I've been strapped to this for almost three hours," Twilight said.

Okay. it's okay. never ok. and why would Twilight not install a kill switch that she can reach? This is the "User gets trapped in a sex machine longer than expected and oh by the way they can't escape" trope.

Twilight was panting, and let out one finale moan as another orgasm struck.

final. Not finale.

"Si want happened, anyway?"

"So what happened, anyway?"

"Yes, please," she said. Twilight stepped away from the console and featured at it.

I have NO idea what you meant here.

There's so much wrong in the last paragraph that I'm not even going to bother. Good luck with whatever this is.

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How did I miss all of those?! I'll go fix those, but I don't know how I missed them!

"Si want happened, anyway?" she asked. Twilight shrugged.

so
this was on an above corrections comment

"There's any orgasm slot?" Sunset Shimmer said with a grin. Twilight sighed.

an

Who's going to break it: Fluttershy, Rarity, or Pinkie Pie?

If this keeps going the next chapter is gonna be like: Pinkie found a strange machine in Twilight's basement. "Ooh i wonder what it does" She turns it on, takes a ride on it, and breaks it. The End.
Honestly, each chapter is just getting shorter.

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Yeah, I know, but I'm kinda running low on ideas for this story.

Any of the Shadowbolt girls.

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Sure! Any you want in particular?


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Thanks!

8653539
That bot has a multi-tentacle app.

8653566
Right, I could do all of them in one chapter.

8653539
how about pony twiligjht you already did human why not do pony version of her

I would like to see the Dazzlings have a go with the device.

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Ok, I don't see why not.


8654347
Ok. That would certainly be intresting.

Well this was fun, up until sunny's part which was just gross and totally ruined the mood.

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Yeah, I try to incorporate a multitude of kinks in the chapters.

There's still Principals Celestia and Luna, Gloriosa Daisy, Juniper Montage, Wallflower Blush, Trixie and more.

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