There are many things Rainbow Dash has accomplished in her life, and they're all something to be proud of. But if she's honest, there's always a hint of superficiality to their nature. With all the trophies on her shelf, it seems a new goal has appeared to dare itself a spot. Yet, will it be a more vulnerable goal than Rainbow Dash expected?
And if she isn't careful, will this goal threaten everything else that she's already wrought?
Looking for good cover art. Clearly I couldn't do a good job. It would be greatly appreciated if someone helped out with this; i'll give you full credit
Chapters (4)
Are you sure? The picture look pretty good to me, I'm just not sure what the pictures suppose to be a picture of. Please respond to this comment.
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Thank you. To me it just doesn't fit what I'm trying to portray. It's supposed to be a double helix, with the combination of the colors of Rainbow Dash and Soarin, as a reference to the second chapter.
Then there's wings cause yeah.
Okay.... I am just going to say it... THIS STORY IS Hilarious! I really think that this is a entertaining and funny story and it's amazing how I didn't get too bored quickly like I normally do. I actually am excited for more. Yay! Good job spellchecking, too.
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Wow thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it!
This has been an intriguing read so far. Despite this topic being ‘uncharted territory’ for you, you did pretty well. Rainbow is very in character, struggling between her awesomeness and the feelings she tries to deny, yet wants them to stay at the same time. Very realistic! Furthermore, it drew an occasional chuckle out of me, great
The only issue I’d point out are the paragraphs joined together sometimes. You don’t need to save space and paper here, so it’s better to split them
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Good job, I hope this story goes off hiatus soon and continues.
It took me a while to get back to this story, but anyway, I'm glad to see a new chapter is out! A short and simple one, but very thoughtful and almost electrifying at the end
Will this story ever be continued?
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Yes of course!! I really love this story and want to explore it. I feel the same for all of my stories. However I have been experiencing a lot of writers block due to mental illness and such, so as I take the time to recover I’m sure I will draw inspiration from that (as it has already happened!) and be able to keep adding on to my stories!
I’m glad you have enjoyed this one! c:
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Alright
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Thank you!