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The Bricklayer

Slow down, you're doing fine, you can't be everything you want to be, before your time... -Vienna, The Stranger: Billy Joel. (Any Pronouns)


No Wonderbolt is left forgotten, nor are their family members left in the dust. Even when hard times hit, they'll always be there for their own.

For Mana's Wonderful Wonderbolts Writing Contest

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 29 )

Wait, that's it? I feel like this story needs more to it.

Yeah, I admit, that's one of many problems with this story.

I very intrigued and positively amazed with this story you wrote regarding Fleetfoot and that you've chosen to have her and Night Glider portrayed as sisters! I also loved the way you've given Spitfire a more gentle and sensitive side in this story as well.

Yeah, Night Glider and Fleetfoot being sisters was fun to write, and it's not that big of a stretch of the imagination to imagine them actually being sisters. I mean, just look at them. They do look awfully similar...

And yeah, showing Spitfire having a more caring side was fun. Considering, like I said, she's the one who gets the most flack for being a bit of a bitch and the most hated of the Bolts, I wanted to show another side to her.

Till the a/n I was wondering if something had happened to one of your family. Guess everything's okay.

Like HolyCross9 and as I said before, I'm amaze how cleverly you match two secondary to tertiary characters. And in the case of Fleetfoot and Night Glider, it's totally believable.

great story, I see you enter the same contest...I wish you luck when your giving your winners speech :twilightsheepish:

Somehow I doubt I'll win, given the competition I'm going up against like the 24th Pegasus. Still, thanks all the same!

How did I never think to make that connection?


Great story. Yeah, as ol’ SPB said, could use a little more, but not at all bad for what it does give. Noice.

It's also ironic since she has a large fanbase too.

Sure is beautiful!

Which one, the plane or the pony?:derpytongue2:

The piece they're featured in.

Also another irony is that Loyalty is usually associated with Rainbow Dash.

Perhaps a Lightning Dust redemption story is more the judges speed?

Still waiting for her return in the series. Heck... we got the return of Iron Will before Lightning Dust.

Yeah, all we've gotten so far out of Lightning Dust are a few cameos here and there. But honestly, I wouldn't know where to begin originality wise with her redemption. So many authors have tackled the subject in one-shots really.

Honestly Brick, I liked this story. Its really good. You've got yourself a thumbs up from me. :twilightsmile:

Really? Looking back, I'm not so sure this is one of my best stories. It's fairly... rushed.

She had the largest family in Equestria, of that she could be certain. If there was one thing she could rely on in the craphole that was her life right now, it was the Wonderbolts. They’d always be there for her, good times or bad.

Oh mu gosh so many of the statements you said about Spit and the Wonderbolts I agree with wholeheartedly.

Where’s the next part! I AM ADDICTED

I found the story you wrote about Fleetfoot fascinating, and the decision to represent her and Night Glider as sisters even more so. In addition, I enjoyed how you gave Spitfire a softer, more sensitive side in this tale. slime rancher 2

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