When a pony and a changeling go for drinks at a new pub, a small accident will be the start of a new relationship in Equestria. Spitfire X Thorax . Part of Mana's Wonderful Wonderbolts Writing Contest - Group Link -
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"A JRPG just isn't a JRPG unless it ends with teenagers using the power of friendship to kill God."
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Honestly, I get the feeling this fic was done in a rush. Everything was far too fast paced, should have slowed down things just a tad for me to really feel the romance.
I love crack pairings! Needs work, but it has potential!
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yep I rushed it but then I was just bored today.
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Thank you
8574104
in hindsight if I made it longer it would be more paced out, my bad
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Yeah, the thing is with a budding romance, it can't be done in just 1,000 words. You need more than that just to build up to it.
Did you win?
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the contest stated today....its not a speed race, but I don't think I will win. oh well
Nice work on thus story.
I detected a new ship.
the needs a 8 to 12 chapter sequel! it was a bit rushed and jerky but the core character behaviors and shipping is great! we need MOAR!