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Grey Knight Neltharion


I am a part of the grey knights chapter, and all will bow before my creative skills!...i-if you want to that is

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Deep in the void between universes, sat a large imposing figure, fully clad in grey, powered armor,
sitting on a throne in a colossal steel fortress, floating in the black void.

This was a very powerful being, but he was far from the only one, there were thousands upon thousands of his kind in the void.

They are called displacers, and their usual source of entertainment, is placing humans from one universe into another, usually an Equestria, after transforming them into something only in entertainment, usually a game, in the displaced humans world, sometimes giving them great power, sometimes making their life incredibly difficult in their new world.

However this being usually displaces beings into things that most of the other displacers don't, for those in the multiverse he knows are watching, or sometimes reading.

And one of the things that humans are rarely displaced into, is the elements of insanity, when there is so much possibility for entertainment!

So here we find our dear displacer, Grey knight Neltharion, debating what human in what world to displace as the elements of insanity.

When he suddenly he finds him, six of them in fact, and their perfect for the role.


Displaced, tags may change, enjoy the story!

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 99 )

A story with the Elements of Insanity....... I must be dreaming.

Can't wait for next chapter!

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Same :pinkiecrazy: This is gonna be good * prepares for ensuing insanity*

My oh my, this story shows alot of promises. I expect this to be very great. Despite the small spelling and grammatical errors, I found that I was able to ignore them for this chapter. Keep it up, you have a promising story.

Comment posted by DAMN HAMSTER deleted Nov 29th, 2017

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Don't listen to him his just a prick but nice story

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Thank you! :twilightsmile: Its always good to know people enjoy what I create

Comment posted by DAMN HAMSTER deleted Nov 29th, 2017

...sir... this is twice you have surprised me, not once, but twice. Love this and was hoping for someone to make this, please continue with this amazing story!!!

Comment posted by DAMN HAMSTER deleted Nov 29th, 2017

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Another displaced author whom you hated on.

Comment posted by DAMN HAMSTER deleted Nov 29th, 2017

RIP Hamster_Master's comments

How am I supposed to tell if a comment is going to make you mad?

So what’s next? Celestia gonna lose her shit when insanity walks in?

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Empty praise stays, criticism/dissent goes. Is this your first Displaced read?

Fyi, "author", you used *mist when you should've used *missed. You see one refers to a weather condition while the other is a verb used to describe the act of forgetting something/not noticing something/missing one's mark.

Well even so, you have to know that criticism can be harsh. Hell, I could've been more blunt on my first comment, but I didn't. Reason why is I wanted to be nice, and I see potential in this story. Just brush up the grammatical , and spelling errors and bam. You got a good story idea, so I'll stay to read.

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After getting blocked by the Reverse Flash, having some weird conversations with writers of displaced stories and seeing these comments, I think I would be making a safe assumption that most displaced writers have the mentality of ''Empty praise stays, criticism/dissent goes.''

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Don't forget the death threats or doxxing attempts.

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death threats

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doxxing attempts.

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I'm so baffled over the idea of people doxxing each other because of fan fiction i don't even know what to type.

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Displaced is just a thinly veiled self-insert genre, so any criticism of their "OC"s is a slight against them personally.

8581946
That or it's an excuse for them to insert different characters from different TV shows, games, or anime. And sometimes those characters don't even retain the consplayer's memories, or they embrace it.
This brings me the biggest and laziest way to introduce the crossover of characters, and what happens to most of the characters? They get turned to stone and reawaken around the start of the actual show!
How convenient!
I will say that there are some few good exceptions of displaced fics, but hey. I'll read them.

8581984
Parodies don't count, no matter entertaining or savage they can be.

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True, but some of these displaced stories I read did follow the same element. But yes, sometimes the parodies can help smooth things over. And it's due to my somewhat limited experience on these types of stories that I anticipate the way the author will write it.
Just got to wait for our author here to update the story to get a better feel for this story.

8581946 If I could I would want to watch a bunch of displaced writers play Dungeons and Dragons (or something similar) with their OCs just to see how the story would play out and how they would interact with each other.

A story featuring the elements of insanity... and its still fresh... am I dreaming? If so punch me in the head cuz I'm a big fan in the insanity series.

This beginning is so good that I want mooooorrreee !!!! This story promise to be exciting and really hope you'll get soon another chapter for this !

continue the good work brother!!!

Ha ! Brutalight found herself alone lol !
But this story seems to be still the one that I want to read so mmooooooorrrrreeee!!!!!

Looking forward to the next chapter, hope its up soon!

Update soon, this story is interesting.

Just came across this story, and boy am I glad. Someone is finally doing a displaced story with the EOI. I can hardly wait to see what the future holds for this one.

Love this story and hope to see more

Why did i got a notification said you added a new chapter?

Yeah I agree with you did you update one of the chapter or did you accident Press some think

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Sorry about that, I was working on the new chapter and accidentally pressed the publish button when I was trying to press edit :twilightsheepish:

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well at least there's going to be a new chapter.

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have to wonder whether or not adrenalin is also an addiction she has.

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