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Dandereshy


I write sins, not tragedies.

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So she's gone from discovering masturbation to full on BDSM, huh? Know what? Sounds legit to me.

So, is there more for her to Discover now?

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Oh, wouldn't you know it? There's always more to discover about yourself. :twilightsmile:

8575536
Can't wait to see what else she discovers about herself then.

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Thanks, and I appreciate the follow. :twilightsmile:

8576397
No worries I still love you.:heart:

Wouldn't mind seeing more of this. Fluttershy makes for such a natural subbie!

8576397
damn it
of course you'd do this to me.
can't trust anyone these days...
am I not allowed to like someone without this shit happening?
I liked you, I TRUSTED you. and then you do this shit to me.
why.
why, why, WHY?
do you hate me? is that it?
what did I do to you? WHAT DID I DO?!?!?
there's only one solution to this:
deleting this written shitstain.
and by the way: don't think reporting me will fix this.
getting me banned/my account deleted will only piss me off more.

8595666
what you want is shit. Just like your opinions. and yourself.

8576397
where's my response?

8576397
TALK TO ME DAMN IT

8576397
SPEAK, INSOLENT WHELP!

8576397
it has been an hour where the fuck are you damn it
talk to me for fucks sake

8607820
I have no idea what you're talking about. :applejackunsure: I think you may have me confused with someone else.

8608360
let me direct you to the message I originally intended for you:

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8608375
I don't know who you are or what you're going on about. I haven't done anything. :unsuresweetie:

8608380
"I haven't done anything"
wrong.
you wrote this shithole apocalypse that I am ashamed to say meets the requirements to be called a story.
you broke my trust by doing so.
you haven't deleted it yet.
therefore, YOU are every part of the problem.

8608385

...

It's a story. For people to read and enjoy. Some may like it, others may not. That's their right, as it is yours. But I do believe attacking me in the comments section and demanding I remove the story is not quite appropriate.

8608389
"not quite appropriate", eh?
like writing this literary aberration and leaving it up for the whole world to see?
like attacking one of your "clients", for lack of better terms?

8608395

Clients...?

You're beginning to scare me. It's literally just a story. You can downvote it and leave a negative review. There's no need to be so abrasive to me for writing it. I'd appreciate if you'd stop commenting here as well unless it's constructive criticism.

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I'm scaring you?
GOOD.
maybe you'll get back into line now.
and I'm not going to stop until this... thing gets taken down.
and no, reporting me won't work.
>inb4 my account gets deleted(etc.) because I dared to speak my mind

8608412
There's an old expression which states that "if you point a finger, there are three fingers pointing back at you." You might want to take that into account. Just because you don't like the fic, it doesn't mean other people can't like it. Just leave a downvote, remove the fic from your clop-folder, and move on.

By insisting the author deletes their story, you're being a bit of a bully. Please try to reflect on your actions.

8608412
What the hell?! I know this is the internet and everything is fair game, but this series of comments is impressively insane even by internet standards. This is a place for creative users to post their content, if you don't like this one specific users take on the characters, or the way their story went then go find another one! No need to harass the writer like that...

Great idea for the next fic in this series

Fluttershy Discovers Tentacles.

It seems like the next logical progression after BDSM

Really, Boss? The first sentence had an error! The first sentence! Also, there was an error in the A.N. (Author's Note): Cthulhu! You need to at least get that part right... ahh!

/Dies from soul being devoured.

Wait... I upvoted, since I did enjoy it. Never mind~ My soul is still here~!

On to a little more pressing things, there were many-a-errors; even for your level of writing. I'm tempted to pass most of it off do to an auto-correct, but I don't know if that is the case. Back to the first sentence:

"Angel, honey, why won't you go?' Fluttershy inquired of the little white bunny pouting on the floor before her.

You put an apostrophe after the question mark, and that wouldn't be closing the dialogue.

Many other errors, but they don't take too much away from the story -- unless someone is like me and the errors come blazing out or are very distracting, in which case it takes quite a bit out. Onward to the story...

I enjoyed the book, inside the story (XD), it was a pleasant refresher; something rather new, I should say. I think it would have helped to have Fluttershy prepare for the whole... escapade a little more; as it felt like she was more striving to do the same thing as the book she read, than have a... um... relieving night of... fun. Then there is Angel Bunny, I'm rootin' on his recovery; and finding out if he really is sick. Finally, may I get that tiny hint about what she discovers next?

Well, well, well; it looks like Fluttershy has found herself a new playmate to try new things out with. I hope Big Mac continues to make appearances to help her...develop :)

Well, Fluttershy has a secret fetish for being dominated and controlled eh:ajsmug:? This I like, and it looks like she finally found somepony to take care of her, and help her with satisfying her newfound sexuality too:scootangel:! Big Mac, you now have the one mare that all stallions would possibly kill for, willing to let you use her however you want. I hope you realize how lucky you are, because you are indeed one very lucky stallion. You’d better take good care of her, and help her fulfill her sexual desires, or else I will give you a look so terrifying, that not even Fluttershy’s Stare will be able to match it:flutter rage:!!!

Have fun you two:raritywink::heart:!!!

Fluttershy just wanted to get him to the vet for his monthly check-up, but as with just about everything else, he refused to cooperate.It was no matter though, as Fluttershy could usually bribe him into things.

Needs a space after the period "...cooperate.It was..."

50 shades of hay

I thought Angel has to wear some collar...
He refused... Fluttershy shows it's not bad (tries herself) and gets a feel for it ... Being a pet.

Shrug. Seems more in character then fs lending erotic novels… not?

Just what kind of "romance" novels is Twilight loaning to her friends? I'm going to take a guess, and say she probably has some kind of crush on Fluttershy, and secretly got herself off knowing that Fluttershy would likely also get herself off. On the other hoof, maybe Twilight had no idea the book had scenes like those.

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Yeah, right there with that thought.

In fact, there should be a two-parter about how Fluttershy discovers that Friendship is not the only magic thing friends can share in their time together. ;]

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In other words, Fluttershy Discovers Lesbian Sex. I can get with that.

I liked reading this story. :heart: :yay:

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I would love to see a series on that one, going through every one of her friends... I think it'd be cute, awkward and dirty all at once. Tasty.

Especially if it could be made awkward. That little tidbit at the end of "Fluttershy Discovers Exhibitionism"?

I can smell your fun like a freshly baked pie

I'd start right there. "Somepony couldn't sleep well at all that night..." ;] In fact, Flutters should be the one pulled into things this time around...

And it'd probably strengthen their bonds even more... ;]

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I have something kinda similar in the makes. Female POV is what I plan to specialize in, as it has been said to me before that this site lacks it quite a bit. The problem is originality. New ideas are hard to come by.

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:heart:

Fluttershy giggled and held him even tighter. "You can just love me like that and go on your way. You're all mine..." She kissed his neck, making him shiver.

*can't?

8608395
Holy shit dude. If stuff like this bothers you so much DON'T READ IT. Leave the poor author alone!

If you didn't know, there is a filter designed to block out M-rated stories.

This was a very lovely, well-written story. The scene where Big Mac paused to make sure Flutters was alright was a nice touch.

10211581
it's the ship that pissed me off, honeypot
anyhow, dredging up 3-years-old shit isn't my idea of an optimal friday night, so maybe find something better to do?

10211751
I am very pleased this story entertained you. Thanks for reading! :twilightsmile:

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