• Member Since 28th Sep, 2017
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Leviathan Jaeger


An attempting writer who loves villains and thinks Sundagio is best ship.

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Sonata decides to go for a walk, feeling unwanted and unloved. This leads her to run into Sunset, someone who might just be what she needs right now more than ever.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 15 )

This is a pretty good start in my opinion! Well written, the conflict is straight forward, even it only got up to Sunset letting Sonata stay with her im already hooked! I can't wait for future chapters and to see where you go with this :) keep up the good work! Oh also when Sonata says: "This is going to be so much fun! We can stay up late, swapping funny stories, and in the morning I'm making waffles!", that was from Shrek when he lets Donkey stay with him isn't it lol?

8570981
I'm glad someone got that reference lol

8570994
Yeah haha i got a good memory plus i don't know if it is just me but i feel that matches well with Sonata's personality and something she would say in addition to Pinkie Pie

8571004
There's actually another reference in this, I wonder if you'll find that one as well.

8571072
Hmmm i didn't recognize any other reference too be honest

8571204
Look at the first chapter title.

8580885
Omg i love that song!!!! R.I.P Robin Williams

So by questionable things are we to assume porn?

8589614
That would have been my second guess.

8590980
It's up for you to decide since it doesn't effect the story.

8590995
Fair enough. Merely curious.

Romance tag doesn't really feel like it fits. A couple types but otherwise i liked it.

9054125
Romance comes later, whenever I get to it

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