Gangs take over Equestria drugs and criminals run rampant along with other perversions and Spike wants to do something about it. Watch (Or read) as he starts a gang the third street Saints and tries to makes a difference (heavily inspired by gta and well saints row duh)
P.S This is my first published story but not my first story the others were scraped and have hardly started so please don't be to hard on me but please give good criticism
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make the chapters longer pls
OH SHIT that first comment was rather quick and i will try
Great story can't wait to read more of it plus I love the saints row series
The story is ok, but if this takes place 3 months after the wedding why is Spike talking like a punk. I mean he should have an amazing vocabulary, did he get punched in the head one too many times in those 3 months?
Also, did Spike grow any in those 3 months and how tough are his scales?
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@Blue Streak for the sake of cannon to my story spike is 19 almost 20 and he is a human he is just a tough son of a bitch. He is quickly adapting to the "new age" of Equestria
also the legal drinking age is 18
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Thanks for the info! I still think Spike should be far better spoken then he currently is though.
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Actually I Think i'm going to make spike 21 he just seems to young at 19
could you tone down the swearing? even sr people dont swear that much. and also please make the chapters more detailed
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Alright i'll try thanks for the suggestion but please do keep in mind this is my first fanfic so i'm going at my own pace and only really when some idea hits me so I don't always have things planned out entirely
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thanks, and if you need an editor, just ask. i proofread my own stuff
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in the original saints row, i could see the main character as being 18 or 19. SR2 is 20 or 21. SR3 is 29. SR4 is 32
Before I read this, is this related to the saints row series?
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Yes and also uses some gta elements
aww. if you fixed up the plotholes and spelling. and tone down the swearing. this could be an amazing story
Yeah maybe make the chapters a bit longer please and also I would like to be your editor.
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Hey man, I appreciate it but this story is dead However I do plan on remaking this story in the future.
(Probably won't be getting around to for a while)
Why isn't this marked as cancelled?
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Oh shit right, Thanks man appricate it!
Excellent storys keep up the good work and I give this story a 10 out of 50