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s00perguy


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An adventure featuring four kids and their journey to the Equestrian border through a dying human world. Their only goal now is the border. A test of the proverb that it is not the destination but the journey to its limits!

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That's too many author's notes, it's damaging the flow. Place them in comment form, that's my suggestion. The vagueness of the war, and your cut-off here isn't very good. Why would the ponies be at war with the humans? What is going on here and why? Even if the kids don't know, the reader's got to have some hints as to why exactly it all went south so they'll get hooked on the story. And why are the ponies immune to damage? That doesn't make too much sense. Or maybe it's because Pinkie Pie, but still.

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i could only read 100 words in before it became retarded

first of all, pinkie pie would've been shattered to tiny fragments of gore by artillery fire

secondly, humans and ponies don't even have a reason to be at war

and lastly, it's plain retarded that nothing worked on them

it's a terrible plot

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939398>>937347 Oi. I wrote a whole thing explaining this, but my iPod is retarded and decided to delete it all. Anyway, this is the shitty first chapter. I despise it equally to the two of you. I know the plot sucks. The war is explained as the government not wanting to give up control of the major population in my head, and I have it in another chapter, but this explanation chapter already felt too messy to slog through as is. Oh, and crown? Be nice. Supportiveness goes a long way, and of you don't like it, please, just don't comment. I especially didn't appreciate the picture. Thank you for the constructive criticism, however. It was helpful. I'll be working hard at making chapter two not absolute shite, but this is my story, I wanted to write it for me, not for an audience. If someone likes it, then great, but it's not for fans. It's just to get it done because it feels like a story that needs to be told. Also, I think the reason it truly sucked was because I was trying to explain it all in one breath, pretty much, and there was no real character development, only the establishment of facts. I'll rewrite it someday to streamline the information, but for now, I'm just getting the story out.
Anyway, back to your criticism. Falling shit can't touch pinkie because of her reality bending/pinkie sense, nothing works because the barrier puts everything into a tech free mode, so planes and missiles just disappear, and nothing works because they're FUCKING CARTOON CHARACTERS. Nuke them and they giggle and keep on coming.
As for the war, again, a government doesn't like to lose their population.
The ponies need ponified humans to repopulate after a catastrophic event which I will specify later. Both populations have gone through such a similar event.

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