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Unwhole Hole
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This is the best shit ever! Holy crap! I mean, I am not a proponent of Molestia even in principal form, or of gay Rainbow Dash. But this was glorious!
And even though Sunset seems to really miss her old body..... Anyway....
The only thing that I could think of as a theme song for the trololo song.
Why the fuck is this so genuinely nice. I must read more !
Few people may see this, it may be stupid, crude, has slightly poor taste in humor and grammar and might not get a front page view, but just know that those of us who do end up reading this enjoy it for what it is. Nonsensical and just plain odd. 8/10 would recommend.
this is stupid, crude and slightly poor taste like the previous comment stated (positively) .... and I love it. Keep writing things in this style and I will read it all. Favorite!
I love the part about pinky and the erasers.
I actually lol'd :D Nice job
breaks -> brakes
through -> throw
color or Rarity -> color of Rarity
I’ll be pack in a short time.” -> be packed?
Indeed, it was a strange vehicle. As they drew closer, though, they could see that it was essentially the front end of a Yugo grafted onto the rear half of a Pinto.
You sick f**k xD
traind -> trained
ring -> wring
Rarity had been lying in the mud and was dirty and covered in small stickers and thorns. Did you mean sticks? twigs?
“I saw we shave it!” -> I say
To be absolutely honest I would look at it two -> too
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Thank you so much for going through all the trouble and pointing out the grammar mistakes. I tend to make a lot of them, and I have a hard time finding them all on my own. I believe I have fixed all the ones you mentioned.
Stupid it may be. I enjoyed reading it tremdously.
Lol
Pinkie did surprise me
Its bigger on the inside!
Where is Chapter 7, and Chapter 12????? This is :NOT" Complete