Mental instability at its finest and aspiring punk rock musician. PS: Buy a creator a coffee to keep him awake? https://ko-fi.com/firerain
You fell out with the pony you love and you want to prove that you still love her, despite knowing she might not be willing to listen. However, stubborn versus overly stubborn sometimes opens the ears and makes one listen.
Hopefully, you, Rainbow Dash, will be able to make Applejack listen.
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To be honest, this story's plot seems to be tremendously forced, especially around this conflict. I actually got extremely irritated at Applejack for being essentially pissed at Rainbow for something that she couldn't control. Yes, you can control the wind and rain, but being able to change the intensity of the storm just so AJ can't lose her hat?
Fucking what.
Was Applejack not notified of the storm? In that case, the conflict would be based on communication, not on the storm itself.
There needs to be more details here, because otherwise, as readers, we're left confused as to why the heck AJ's pissed because of happenstance.
This one didn't sit right with me.