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SheetGhost


I am a fan of MY LITTLE PONY: FRIENDSHIP IS MAGIC. I have written FANFICTION about MAGICAL MINIATURE HORSES. I should really RE-EXAMINE MY PRIORITIES IN LIFE.

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the mare on the moon, she is the engineer

*chuckles* Yes, that's what I thought the ponies were doing upon the hilltop. And Luna, in her Nightmare hate, drove away the last of those who loved her.

The price of selfish jealousy and foolish arrogance.

1000 years waiting for 15 minutes fun – I doubt that was worth it.

I dont even know anymore.... 8/10... to depressed for full stats...

I can't hold all these feels. :fluttershysad: :pinkiesad2: :fluttercry:

Revenge is a bitter, bitter thing. it knaws at our souls and throws salt on our wounds.
at least we know that things worked out in the end, eventually.
i'm still sad though :fluttercry:

Wow. Extremely well-written; a joy to read. I wasn't expecting the ending, and it hit me pretty hard. Excellent story. Favourited.

One mistake: "every once and a while" should be "every once in a while".

Crushing. This takes the whole "grand fuck-up" of her descent to madness and subsequent banishment and turns it up to eleven.

Oh dear... That was sad. It was inevitable, but sad... :pinkiesad2::fluttercry:

Meanwhile, on a small, barren-looking farm just outside of Ponyville, a pegasus filly born to earth pony parents laughed, and showed the biggest face she'd ever seen some funny faces of her own.

This was pretty great. I like how you bring the reader into her head, but leave enough distance so that we realize that she is making a huge mistake. And that ending was beautiful.:pinkiesad2:

How sad. :raritydespair:

This explains why everyone had forgotten her when she return. Tia tried to make the pony's remember her. But with so much anger in her self that she ruined her chance for an early redemption.
So sad.... Now I most find something funny to do.

This story is now one of my most favorite stories of all time! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Wow. No dialogue at all. That was pulled of very well, much better than anything full of wordy words straight from the horses' mouthes. How could a story with so little happening be so involving. I bow before you. -u-

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Written so long ago, yet still excellent.

Damn this was good. It gives me the kinda vibes I can’t describe that the into in the first episode of MLP gave me. Thank you for writing this.

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