Dark Sunset

by pabrony

Author's Notes

This was written from the heart and I'd like to dedicate it to everyone that has lost a loved one to suicide.

This is NOT part of the SciTwi Shimmer Chronicles.

The two and half hour movie that was mentioned was supposed to be "Transformers: The Last Knight." I love "Transformers" but the last two movies sucked in my opinion.

I'm doing a follow-up one shot with Fluttershy since she had been the main one with Sunset during her depression.

Comments

[TheGreatEater]

8552628

You're welcome . When I get through my long neglected unread chapters in my favorites, I'll look through some of your other work. Any stories you've written that are your favs?

[pabrony]

I'm proud of the SciTwi Shimmer series that I'm working on.

[Saberking2012]

8552239 You might want to put this in AU. Just feels right. Of course, that's up to you.

[Tethered-Angel]

I'd definitely love to read a followup with Fluttershy

[pabrony]

8553808 It might be a week or two before I start the sequel. I'm trying to get My Little Pony: Gag Reels Are Magic finished up plus work on my Christmas fic. This story actually took me about a week and a half to write.

[Tethered-Angel]

8553839
I'll be looking forward to it then

[pabrony]

8553881 I guess I have work to do then. And for the record, the sequel will NOT have Fluttershy trying to take her own life.

[Tethered-Angel]

8553939
I would hope not!

[pabrony]

8553944 Just wanted to get that in the open in case anyone might think that this would lead to a similar situation (losing a friend/loved one and then taking their life).

[Tethered-Angel]

8553956
Man, that would get dark fast...

Darker, I mean.

[pabrony]

8554000 Yes. Yes it would. Plus I already have Fluttershy attempting (and failing) suicide in Friendship is Forever.

[Tethered-Angel]

8554049
Huh, I haven't read that one yet.

[Saberking2012]

8553939 Oh thank goodness, you had me worried for a second there because I don't think my heart would be able take losing my favorite character

[pabrony]

8554087 It was my first story, inspired by Argodaemon's video, Remembrance. I started it in January and finished it in July. It's 21 chapters long and it's kinda sad.

[pabrony]

8554225 Fluttershy is acting kind of odd right now. Might have something to do with Sunset. (I'm not working on a sequel ahead of time or anything)

[Saberking2012]

8554274 That worries me

[pabrony]

8554286 It'll all make sense in the final product.

[knigsonic]

ok, I still dont see why people hate Age of Extinction... Last Knight, I sorta see the hate, but not AoE.
*whisper*
Huh? this was a story about Sunset committing suicide?
*whisper*
I should be talking about the obvious feels I got instead of commenting on why everyone hates AoE?
*whisper*
alright fine....

Why does everyone hate on Age of Extin-*Gets pulled away from keyboard shouting about the movie*

[pabrony]

8554546

Why does everyone hate on Age of Extin-*Gets pulled away from keyboard shouting about the movie*

That made me laugh.

[knigsonic]

8554853
I am to kid around XD

[JWolfSilver]

I Kinda Expected that ending as soon as it go to the notes. Sad stuff like this does happen though in real life. It was well written and overall an amazing story.

[pabrony]

8668775 Thanks.

[Mahtan]

You know this could be a suitable dark ending to the scitwi shimmer thing.

[pabrony]

8856284 I actually have a sad/dark ending planned for the final story in the SciTwi Shimmer Chronicles.

[Mahtan]

8856339
Oooooo, now I have something to trive for (other than the manga/anime releases).

[Golden Fang Ryu Shenron]

Thanks for the note.