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TheVClaw


I'm a shameless neckbeard who has a knack for writing a LOT of smut. I have an Official Patreon page (Patreon.com/TheVClaw), and I also take commissions to help support myself as a freelance writer.

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Sequel?
I loved this fic. One of the best Tempestlight fics I have ever read.
God, I would like to see more of this.

Aw, I can't find the completed image anywhere, just the sketch. :fluttershysad:

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It'll be up soon. I accidentally posted an incomplete pic the artist is working on. If you follow their tumblr or deviantart (in the story description), you can see the pic the instant it comes up.

[EDIT]: The post is officially up on 10art1's tumblr, so go check it out if you want!

While Twilight grew a confused look, Tempest froze with widened eyes while hearing her assistant run off down the hall. As the Princess glanced back at her with narrowed eyes, the unicorn could only grow a little paler as she realized how badly things might go. Especially if The Storm King found out what she did. “Oh… crap.”

Crap indeed, Tempest.

Hark! The VClaw writing a F/F story? The world's ending!

Seriously though... great shit. Love the ending as well! I seem to remember you noting that you love to end your clop stories on a funny note, and this counts.

this had a few wtf moments but was overall sweet I like it I think it needs a sequel

Awesome keep up the good work. Also sequel.

What's this nonsense about an inhibitor ring? It was an anti-magic cage. :twilightblush:

8574531 Yeah, I don't get it. We finally have canon anti-magic stuff, and people still using fan head-canon.

Also, kinda hard to see romance in this when Twilight was coerced into sex.

TheVClaw doing f/f pairings now? Did I suddenly jump into an alternate reality?

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IDK... redundancy? You know... 2 is 1, 1 is none?

Finally a good 'Tempest gets eaten out fic' thank you!

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Ever thought that a inhibitor ring would be more convenient than a cage would be? I mean, I would believe she would want a means of preventing Twilight from using magic without having to lug around a cage every time they needed to transport her.

8575805 I meant the horn sheaths that they had unicorns wearing (being held on by the slave bridles).

This was such a good story! I'm glad that you decided to write it!

Also, I spotted a typo.

Canterlot could only watch as her marehoof convulsed

I think that's meant to be marehood?

Time for aftermath.

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Isn't that the same thing as an inhibitor ring?

8577882 Close, but one of them is canon. :twilightsmile:

Wait so Twilights friends turn their backs on her AGAIN?

Wow, just wow...

Granted, I didnt see the movie so i cant judge much.

I really liked this fiction! Nice work!!!

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To be fair, it was handled much better in the movie than it was in the Royal Wedding episode.

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What happened?

Dont worry im not sensitive to spoilers

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I'd recommend seeing the movie. I don't wanna spoil it through text.

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Yeah, I'd agree. So much better handled, but still a tearjerker through and through. I'd arguably say because of how much better it was handled, and what led up to it, it was even more heartbreaking than the wedding.

Does Mlp have a certain hatred for Twilight?

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Well this story isn't exactly canon, so I don't feel it has to follow the canon of MLP 100 percent.

Broadcast live across Canterlot?!?!! Ooohh, how embarrassing!!!! :twilightblush::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::twilightblush:

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