SO...MANY...KISSES AND . Anyways, just a question : Will there be any chapter in the future that'll involve both of them in a "quarrel" or to argue with each other? Also, If Celestia was flying in the sky, even if she had an invisibility spell on, it doesn't necesairly make her undetectable by radar and hidden from(EXAMPLE) RAF Menwith Hill's Airforce base in the U.K : This place is basically a military base where EVERYTHING that is launched or flying in the sky gets detected by them before ANYONE else (It's the largest electronic monitoring station in the world)... so I expect them to have detected our lovely couple in the sky... If you want some more information :
I admit, the earlier bits were so romantic as to be cheesy, but it was all well and good. So much affection, it's a sad thing I never hear about this in real life.
YES!!! UPDATES!!! Jeez Daniel is a gentleman. For some reason i always mix Daniel with David from your Luna story. It gets confusing at times, but i love them nonetheless! Great job!
2232410 Yeah, I wonder if their stories intermingle because I don't remember David being mentioned at the beginning of this story and it obviously wasn't set before then, was it?
... And if/when Celestia takes him back with her to Equestria/Canterlot, all Ponies will learn to ignore the human sitting next to Celestia in Court, softly stroking her mane and scratching behind her ears when she gets stressed by the Nobles. Anypony whosoever even lifts a hoof in protest at this alien touching their Princess in such an intimate manner with be faced with Her thunderous glare... right before her eyes close in gentle pleasure, due to her beloved's attention.
Ah, man, what a sweet chapter. It was soooo worth the wait. I missed these two so much, I'd forgotten how intense their love was. Jaydex, pal, I don't think there's a better Romance story on this site, I really mean that. It's so fluffy it makes my heart long for such affection, I pray one day I can meet these standards with my own somebody.
Love like this is truly inspiring, your fingers make some real magic! Hey wait... where's the slow dance scene!?
Am I the only one who thinks that this story is becoming kinda...awkward? Feels like a first time in love, teen romance. "I love you" "No I love you" "No I love you"
2231650 Come on Discord, don't miss the "magic" part. This is Celestia we're talking about. If she wants to hide from people, she certainly has the power, wouldn't you agree?
As for will they have a quarrel? I do have one planned, but not for a while, right now they are in the grip of the "lover's haze" and won't find much fault with each other for the time being.
2231813 Hope you enjoy it. BTW, love your avatar pic! Celestia looks so cute with a scroll in her mouth!
2231880 I've thought about that myself. I've never experienced such affection in my life. But oh well, at least there are stories! I'll try to make sure the next chapter doesn't take 3-4 months before it's released.
2231927 Have no fear, this story shall continue! In my last blog, I mentioned having plenty of material to keep this story going!
2232054 Imagine hard enough and it will be, even if it only lasts as long as you read.
2232410 Thank you my friend. I can see why it is easy to mix the two up. They are very similar, but if you look deep you can tell them apart.
2232434 It's funny, but before I started writing this chapter, I recently bought a copy of "The Last Unicorn". So when I thought about what should Celestia read next, the answer seemed clear. I enjoyed the art and music in the movie as well as Lady Amalthea. She was a very pretty unicorn.
As for intermingling my Luna and Celestia stories, it's something I'm considering, but I need to finish my Luna fic before hand, otherwise there will be spoilers come the end of this story.
2232555 I hope you enjoy it. I'll try to make sure the next chapter doesn't take as long. Sadly I ran into some unforeseen delays.
2232827 You paint an enjoyable scene in the Throne room. I thoroughly enjoyed your comment. Celestia and Daniel will eventual go to Equestria, but not till the end of this story. I'm actually planning the sequel to showcase their time in Equerstria. However, nothing is in stone, so maybe I will mix things up. I'll be sure to give it some thought!
2233085 My friend, I loved your comment. Everything about. I'm glad you and so many others seem to be continuing to love this, and I must say I always enjoy writing the new chapters! As for the typos, don't worry, I knew there would be a few that'd slip by. Thanks for pointing them out. They have been promptly fixed! I hope I can continue providing great updates to this story and new fics as well!
Oh yeah, as for the slow dance scene, if you noted the chapter's ending, they haven't gotten to that part of their evening yet!
2233135 I relish the idea of working on chapter 7!
2233150 Glad you liked it! I have even more win to come!
2233369 Always good hearing from you my friend! Glad you enjoyed it. I fixed some of the errors. At least I'm getting better at reducing them, and I have awesome followers and readers like you that help me find an fix the ones I miss.
2233491 That won't be for a while yet. There will eventually be mention of her life in Equestria, but for now she's just enjoying her vacation and has been swept up in the joy of having a new lover.
2233911 I will tell you that the song will be very special. It's one of my favorite songs that was used in a popular movie back in the late 90's. That's all I'm going to say about it. Plus there will be a few other songs they just sit on his bed and listen to. You'll have to wait to read the chapter when it's released.
I usually admit my love for clop unabashedly, and I love this fic as well, but it's so tooth-rottingly sappy that it makes me glance over my shoulder to ensure no one is watching. Then again, I do that for Fabio novels too, so I guess that means it's well-written.
Ah man, the warehouse scene brought up some memories, I used to be the manifest director in one of those god awful chicken plants....So many dead chickens The Last Unicorn is always a great thing to reference, though I think Amalthea had it a little bit rougher in her romance than Celestia, and Daniel do
Good times for the most part, I think sometimes the dialogue seems a little rushed. Like when Celestia suggests to take him flying, and he is like "Yeah, sounds fun. Now here's my idea." I dunno, that just kinda seemed rather brush off-ish to me. Like I said, all in all very nice romance, but once again, you are going to give people diabetes with the way they talk to one another
WHAT NO CONDITIONER oh the atrocity the shame it is the... worst... possible... thing... nah not really. I really enjoy this keep upnthe good work my freind
2233886 Heh, I'll admit, I do look forward to reading your replies in the mornings! We can always count ya to let us know we're cared about! Well I sure hope you're not lying about writing them, we all expect for these great stories to continue until we die! no really. I've still got at least 60 years in me alone; chop chop.
I am curious though, how long do you think this story will go on? I know you said in your recent blog that you've got the ending in mind and in a comment above ya mentioned you were pondering a sequel, sounds like there's still a lot of room for this story!
On the slow dance scene, I'll admit to being disappointed a little. I had myself all prepared for the chapter to end right there in the middle / near end of their dance! But... we can wait.
Heh, unlikely the military will bother since they were over a small town. If anything, they would have more to worry about near-missing a news helecopter or some small aircraft going about it's business. And with the size of an alicorn, they'd be seen as nothing more than an ultralight lazing about the sky.
...I'd go so far as to speculate that such a worry will never happen short of Celestia purposefully buzzing a base-- assuming one is anywhere's near them. Now if this was Russia or some other far-more paranoid military state, then they might cause a... flap.
Whilst Celestia sat at her grand mahogany desk, continuing to do her usual neverending stack of paperwork - as Daniel kept massaging her neck, back, shoulders and wing muscles - the Solar Princess groaned softly, her eyes briefly closing. A moment later, however, the Solar Diarch opened her eyes and turned her head to gaze fondly at her human mate. "Why is it that the paperwork is always ten times worse on a Sunday?" she grumbled. Continuing to ease the tension from her body, Daniel chuckled before he replied, "Because it's the day before Monday, love. That's bureaucracy for you; the same in both our worlds, I guess..." Heaving a weary sigh, Celestia just nodded before letting out a frustrated groan. Then, bending her head back over her desk, she returned to work, all the more grateful for her beloved's soothing touch.
Her face turned red as she focused her eyes back on the frying pan. “Um, well, my humming may sound nice, but I doubt you’d enjoy my singing,” she confessed.
*reads that* Whut?
LIES!!! It is written in the laws of Fandom that Celestia has a -censored for lols- incredible singing voice!
Please, have her sing in some chapter so we can picture this glorious voice?
2236214 When someone refers to "prying eyes" they mean more than just sight alone. Like I said before, "This is Celestia we're talking about." And if you recall from chapter 1, she leaned her invisibility spell from Starswirl, I doubt they'd have much to fear from anyone while under its concealing power - and I do mean power.
2235563 I love the video of the G-man celebrating and the gif below!
2235282 I was not suggesting her singing voice is bad, I was simply having Celestia be modest. I thought that was implied by her tone and her blushing cheeks. I've actually got a scene planed in one of the upcoming chapters where Daniel gets to hear her lovely singing voice.
2235276 Another delightful scene, and now you can see why she's enjoying her time on Earth with Daniel and hasn't really gone overboard on worrying about her duties back in Equestria. Like Luna noted in chapter 1 - she hadn't had a real vacation in too long.
Well I sure hope you're not lying about writing them, we all expect for these great stories to continue until we die!
I'm not lying. I sincerely love writing this story. It's been a way I can showcase my fondness for Celestia and show her respect and see that she gets some affections, via one of my OCs. I also enjoy the other stories I write, and plan to keep them coming! I know how much you all enjoy them! It's thanks to comments like these that I have the drive to keep writing!
2234557 I'll be sure to do just that my friend. Glad you enjoyed it!
2234127 Yeah, his reaction to flying with her might seem a little brushed-off, but as he replied he thought about their risk of being seen, and giving the fact that he just finished a rough day a work, and was relaxing with her, he might not seem like he's jumping out of his skin, given how calming it is lying there with her. Plus if you'll recall, when the time for the flight arrived, he was more than excited about it.
2233978 That is unfair, and is why I started the group "Celestia Is The Best Pony". It has a nice assortment of Celestia stories, in which she is the star. In fact following my release of this one, quite few human x Celestia fics started popping up.
2233962 I know this story can be a bit sappy at times, but the majority of my readers seem to love it. Though I sometimes look over my shoulder as I write and edit these stories, but I'm certainly not ashamed about writing them.
2236451 Yes, all Ponies can sing with the best of them really. In fact, horses can too. I remember in history class, my teacher use to tell tales of how great Hun warriors were inspired by their mounts god like war hymens.
Now that I think about it, it was either history class, or that one time I ate the weird flour under the sink with the cute mouse on the package. It was one of the two, can't recall it right now.
Your stories...they...provide a severe sense of realism, despite their premise (pony in a human world, or the other way around). When they woke up and Celestia went to the bathroom, for a short moment I thought "Why'd he have to include something so weird and trivial like that?" But then I realized, it did answer the question I always ask myself, 'When do these people [in the TV and movies]...er...go?' When Daniel checks the weather report and explains how radars work to Celestia, when the latter grows bored of the computer, and many other situations, it made it all more real. If this were to actually happen, things like this would fill the twenty-four hours of each day, would it not? I thank you, Jay, for taking all the tedious - but obviously enjoyed - time to write all the trivial between-the-love-scenes stuff, and to make such fucking great work.
In other news, loved the shower scene.
In other other news,
...oh, and I have some bread toasting in the toaster...
2240356 & 2242333 I know what you both mean. Part of the reason I wrote this was because they aren't many good Celestia x Human romances. Most involving her and a human are just clop and very little if any tenderness. One thing you two can be sure of, this story is far from over. I've got material to keep this going for quite a while. Plus I really enjoy writing this!
2242050 There's another love/clop scene planned for chapter 7. I was going to have it in chapter 6 but the chapter started running long. I don't want every chapter to be almost 14,000 words. lol. Though, I don't mind when they go over 10,000.
2239692 I think you do understand why I detail some of the scenes I do. I thought having Celestia get up to use the bathroom would add an element of realism, because we all gotta go sometime (even ponies), and second it was a cute way for her to get the shower idea, plus then I saw the chance for a dawww scene upon her returning to snuggle with Daniel. And you are right, I do really enjoy writing those scenes that some might call tedious. I enjoyed writing the sequence while Celestia was home alone, thinking of things to do till Daniel got home from work.
Glad you liked the shower scene and thanks for the enjoyable comment! I hope I can keep adding great chapters to this story!
2239121 I'm thrilled you liked it and can't wait for the next. I'm looking forward to working on the next chapter myself. I have a few projects I need to get to before I can start on chapter 7. But it should be another great one.
2237456 I just wanted to make sure you knew. BTW thanks for sharing that YouTube link, I love Celestia's song from the season 3 finale. Her voice is so angelic! After playing it from your comment, it was stuck in my head most of the night at work...I couldn't have been happier!
It updated!
OMIGOSHOMIGOSHOMIGOSHOMIGOSHOMIGOSH!!!!! CHAPTER 6!!!! ACTIVATE READER MODE.....
SO...MANY...KISSES
AND .
Anyways, just a question : Will there be any chapter in the future that'll involve both of them in a "quarrel" or to argue with each other?
Also, If Celestia was flying in the sky, even if she had an invisibility spell on, it doesn't necesairly make her undetectable by radar and hidden from(EXAMPLE) RAF Menwith Hill's Airforce base in the U.K : This place is basically a military base where EVERYTHING that is launched or flying in the sky gets detected by them before ANYONE else
(It's the largest electronic monitoring station in the world)... so I expect them to have detected our lovely couple in the sky...
If you want some more information :
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yay update
Ah, it's been too long.
I admit, the earlier bits were so romantic as to be cheesy, but it was all well and good. So much affection, it's a sad thing I never hear about this in real life.
Keep up the EXCELLENT work.
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"Oh daaahling, this was simply wonderful!
Possibly even the most wonderful of all the romantic novels I have read.
Surely you must keep this up dear!"
2231650 True to that... They might have the military knocking down the door and taking them into custody....
Or worse...
Commence read.
Good times for Celestia and Daniel.
Why can't this be me
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YES!!! UPDATES!!!
Jeez Daniel is a gentleman.
For some reason i always mix Daniel with David from your Luna story. It gets confusing at times, but i love them nonetheless!
Great job!
Alright, time for the Last Unicorn videos.
2232410 Yeah, I wonder if their stories intermingle because I don't remember David being mentioned at the beginning of this story and it obviously wasn't set before then, was it?
... And if/when Celestia takes him back with her to Equestria/Canterlot, all Ponies will learn to ignore the human sitting next to Celestia in Court, softly stroking her mane and scratching behind her ears when she gets stressed by the Nobles. Anypony whosoever even lifts a hoof in protest at this alien touching their Princess in such an intimate manner with be faced with Her thunderous glare... right before her eyes close in gentle pleasure, due to her beloved's attention.
Ah, man, what a sweet chapter. It was soooo worth the wait. I missed these two so much, I'd forgotten how intense their love was. Jaydex, pal, I don't think there's a better Romance story on this site, I really mean that. It's so fluffy it makes my heart long for such affection, I pray one day I can meet these standards with my own somebody.
Love like this is truly inspiring, your fingers make some real magic! Hey wait... where's the slow dance scene!?
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Also spotted a few errors, pal:
Hate to be a stickler like that
Woot, moar chapters.
Anywho another good read. Can't wait for more.
So much win in this chapter!
During read:
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After read:
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A couple of errors here and there, but other then that,
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BTW, Have a funny gif.
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Exellent as always, but when will you start to bring up how their relationship will work when she have to return to Equestria?
Am I the only one who thinks that this story is becoming kinda...awkward?
Feels like a first time in love, teen romance.
"I love you"
"No I love you"
"No I love you"
2231650
Come on Discord, don't miss the "magic" part. This is Celestia we're talking about. If she wants to hide from people, she certainly has the power, wouldn't you agree?
As for will they have a quarrel? I do have one planned, but not for a while, right now they are in the grip of the "lover's haze" and won't find much fault with each other for the time being.
2231813
Hope you enjoy it. BTW, love your avatar pic! Celestia looks so cute with a scroll in her mouth!
2231880
I've thought about that myself. I've never experienced such affection in my life. But oh well, at least there are stories! I'll try to make sure the next chapter doesn't take 3-4 months before it's released.
2231927
Have no fear, this story shall continue! In my last blog, I mentioned having plenty of material to keep this story going!
2232054
Imagine hard enough and it will be, even if it only lasts as long as you read.
2232410
Thank you my friend. I can see why it is easy to mix the two up. They are very similar, but if you look deep you can tell them apart.
2233729
I'll be honest, it's become a bit corny, what they say, at least.
2232434
It's funny, but before I started writing this chapter, I recently bought a copy of "The Last Unicorn". So when I thought about what should Celestia read next, the answer seemed clear. I enjoyed the art and music in the movie as well as Lady Amalthea. She was a very pretty unicorn.
As for intermingling my Luna and Celestia stories, it's something I'm considering, but I need to finish my Luna fic before hand, otherwise there will be spoilers come the end of this story.
2232555
I hope you enjoy it. I'll try to make sure the next chapter doesn't take as long. Sadly I ran into some unforeseen delays.
2232827
You paint an enjoyable scene in the Throne room. I thoroughly enjoyed your comment. Celestia and Daniel will eventual go to Equestria, but not till the end of this story. I'm actually planning the sequel to showcase their time in Equerstria. However, nothing is in stone, so maybe I will mix things up. I'll be sure to give it some thought!
2233085
My friend, I loved your comment. Everything about. I'm glad you and so many others seem to be continuing to love this, and I must say I always enjoy writing the new chapters! As for the typos, don't worry, I knew there would be a few that'd slip by. Thanks for pointing them out. They have been promptly fixed! I hope I can continue providing great updates to this story and new fics as well!
Oh yeah, as for the slow dance scene, if you noted the chapter's ending, they haven't gotten to that part of their evening yet!
2233135
I relish the idea of working on chapter 7!
2233150
Glad you liked it! I have even more win to come!
2233369
Always good hearing from you my friend! Glad you enjoyed it. I fixed some of the errors. At least I'm getting better at reducing them, and I have awesome followers and readers like you that help me find an fix the ones I miss.
2233491
That won't be for a while yet. There will eventually be mention of her life in Equestria, but for now she's just enjoying her vacation and has been swept up in the joy of having a new lover.
For,some little reason I [lol} on this sentence...
So,next chapter their gonna dance...
Can you tell me what can of music is it.
I can imagine Daniel and Celestia dancing to this
This a really good song but,Its for your Luna story...Oh well.
I think this the right one for Celestia and Daniel.
2233911
I will tell you that the song will be very special. It's one of my favorite songs that was used in a popular movie back in the late 90's. That's all I'm going to say about it. Plus there will be a few other songs they just sit on his bed and listen to. You'll have to wait to read the chapter when it's released.
2233928 Awwww...Okay then.
I usually admit my love for clop unabashedly, and I love this fic as well, but it's so tooth-rottingly sappy that it makes me glance over my shoulder to ensure no one is watching. Then again, I do that for Fabio novels too, so I guess that means it's well-written.
aaawwwww that was sweet......it is sad that Celestia doesnt have a lot of her own personal fictions, it is trully unfair
Ah man, the warehouse scene brought up some memories, I used to be the manifest director in one of those god awful chicken plants....So many dead chickens The Last Unicorn is always a great thing to reference, though I think Amalthea had it a little bit rougher in her romance than Celestia, and Daniel do
Good times for the most part, I think sometimes the dialogue seems a little rushed. Like when Celestia suggests to take him flying, and he is like "Yeah, sounds fun. Now here's my idea." I dunno, that just kinda seemed rather brush off-ish to me. Like I said, all in all very nice romance, but once again, you are going to give people diabetes with the way they talk to one another
WHAT NO CONDITIONER
oh the atrocity the shame it is the... worst... possible... thing...
nah not really. I really enjoy this keep upnthe good work my freind
2233886
Heh, I'll admit, I do look forward to reading your replies in the mornings! We can always count ya to let us know we're cared about!
Well I sure hope you're not lying about writing them, we all expect for these great stories to continue until we die! no really. I've still got at least 60 years in me alone; chop chop.
I am curious though, how long do you think this story will go on? I know you said in your recent blog that you've got the ending in mind and in a comment above ya mentioned you were pondering a sequel, sounds like there's still a lot of room for this story!
On the slow dance scene, I'll admit to being disappointed a little. I had myself all prepared for the chapter to end right there in the middle / near end of their dance! But... we can wait.
2231650
Heh, unlikely the military will bother since they were over a small town. If anything, they would have more to worry about near-missing a news helecopter or some small aircraft going about it's business. And with the size of an alicorn, they'd be seen as nothing more than an ultralight lazing about the sky.
...I'd go so far as to speculate that such a worry will never happen short of Celestia purposefully buzzing a base-- assuming one is anywhere's near them. Now if this was Russia or some other far-more paranoid military state, then they might cause a... flap.
Whilst Celestia sat at her grand mahogany desk, continuing to do her usual neverending stack of paperwork - as Daniel kept massaging her neck, back, shoulders and wing muscles - the Solar Princess groaned softly, her eyes briefly closing. A moment later, however, the Solar Diarch opened her eyes and turned her head to gaze fondly at her human mate. "Why is it that the paperwork is always ten times worse on a Sunday?" she grumbled. Continuing to ease the tension from her body, Daniel chuckled before he replied, "Because it's the day before Monday, love. That's bureaucracy for you; the same in both our worlds, I guess..." Heaving a weary sigh, Celestia just nodded before letting out a frustrated groan. Then, bending her head back over her desk, she returned to work, all the more grateful for her beloved's soothing touch.
*reads that* Whut?
LIES!!! It is written in the laws of Fandom that Celestia has a -censored for lols- incredible singing voice!
Please, have her sing in some chapter so we can picture this glorious voice?
My reaction when I saw that this was updated:
My reaction after reading the chapter:
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2233805
"Magic Part", yes I do remember it in mind, but she never thought of hiding herself from radars, only from eye sight...right?
2231933
2236214
When someone refers to "prying eyes" they mean more than just sight alone. Like I said before, "This is Celestia we're talking about." And if you recall from chapter 1, she leaned her invisibility spell from Starswirl, I doubt they'd have much to fear from anyone while under its concealing power - and I do mean power.
2235563
I love the video of the G-man celebrating and the gif below!
2235282
I was not suggesting her singing voice is bad, I was simply having Celestia be modest. I thought that was implied by her tone and her blushing cheeks. I've actually got a scene planed in one of the upcoming chapters where Daniel gets to hear her lovely singing voice.
2235276
Another delightful scene, and now you can see why she's enjoying her time on Earth with Daniel and hasn't really gone overboard on worrying about her duties back in Equestria. Like Luna noted in chapter 1 - she hadn't had a real vacation in too long.
2234604
I'm not lying. I sincerely love writing this story. It's been a way I can showcase my fondness for Celestia and show her respect and see that she gets some affections, via one of my OCs. I also enjoy the other stories I write, and plan to keep them coming! I know how much you all enjoy them! It's thanks to comments like these that I have the drive to keep writing!
2234557
I'll be sure to do just that my friend. Glad you enjoyed it!
2234127
Yeah, his reaction to flying with her might seem a little brushed-off, but as he replied he thought about their risk of being seen, and giving the fact that he just finished a rough day a work, and was relaxing with her, he might not seem like he's jumping out of his skin, given how calming it is lying there with her. Plus if you'll recall, when the time for the flight arrived, he was more than excited about it.
2233978
That is unfair, and is why I started the group "Celestia Is The Best Pony". It has a nice assortment of Celestia stories, in which she is the star. In fact following my release of this one, quite few human x Celestia fics started popping up.
2233962
I know this story can be a bit sappy at times, but the majority of my readers seem to love it. Though I sometimes look over my shoulder as I write and edit these stories, but I'm certainly not ashamed about writing them.
It is stated in the bowls of the rules of MLP that every pony has a good singing voice
2236451 Yes, all Ponies can sing with the best of them really. In fact, horses can too. I remember in history class, my teacher use to tell tales of how great Hun warriors were inspired by their mounts god like war hymens.
Now that I think about it, it was either history class, or that one time I ate the weird flour under the sink with the cute mouse on the package. It was one of the two, can't recall it right now.
2236432
And I know you weren't implying such.
An another fucking amazing chapter very well done can't wait for the next chapter :)
2234935 Yup..... USA is totally not paranoid in this case : P Flying horse? Terrorist!
This chapter, quick description from me:
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Your stories...they...provide a severe sense of realism, despite their premise (pony in a human world, or the other way around). When they woke up and Celestia went to the bathroom, for a short moment I thought "Why'd he have to include something so weird and trivial like that?" But then I realized, it did answer the question I always ask myself, 'When do these people [in the TV and movies]...er...go?' When Daniel checks the weather report and explains how radars work to Celestia, when the latter grows bored of the computer, and many other situations, it made it all more real. If this were to actually happen, things like this would fill the twenty-four hours of each day, would it not? I thank you, Jay, for taking all the tedious - but obviously enjoyed - time to write all the trivial between-the-love-scenes stuff, and to make such fucking great work.
In other news, loved the shower scene.
In other other news,
REMEMBER KIDS, ALL TOASTERS TOAST TOAST.
Very nice!
Too bad, there aren't many Celestia/Human stories.
Hot and lovely, as always.
Needs more pony sex though.
2240356 Iagree
'Tis a shame
2240356 & 2242333
I know what you both mean. Part of the reason I wrote this was because they aren't many good Celestia x Human romances. Most involving her and a human are just clop and very little if any tenderness. One thing you two can be sure of, this story is far from over. I've got material to keep this going for quite a while. Plus I really enjoy writing this!
2242050
There's another love/clop scene planned for chapter 7. I was going to have it in chapter 6 but the chapter started running long. I don't want every chapter to be almost 14,000 words. lol. Though, I don't mind when they go over 10,000.
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I think you do understand why I detail some of the scenes I do. I thought having Celestia get up to use the bathroom would add an element of realism, because we all gotta go sometime (even ponies), and second it was a cute way for her to get the shower idea, plus then I saw the chance for a dawww scene upon her returning to snuggle with Daniel. And you are right, I do really enjoy writing those scenes that some might call tedious. I enjoyed writing the sequence while Celestia was home alone, thinking of things to do till Daniel got home from work.
Glad you liked the shower scene and thanks for the enjoyable comment! I hope I can keep adding great chapters to this story!
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I'm thrilled you liked it and can't wait for the next. I'm looking forward to working on the next chapter myself. I have a few projects I need to get to before I can start on chapter 7. But it should be another great one.
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I just wanted to make sure you knew. BTW thanks for sharing that YouTube link, I love Celestia's song from the season 3 finale. Her voice is so angelic! After playing it from your comment, it was stuck in my head most of the night at work...I couldn't have been happier!
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Heh, I don't think it will be all that hard for you.