Loved this chapter
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MOAR I'M LOVIN IT!!

and first kuz i can

zomg this is such a lovely and adorable story! I'm just loving how everything is progressing. It kinda makes me go d'aaawww and need a hug

Yeah ummmmm when you get around to it make more...I mean if you want to

Yay, Another Good Chapter!
Hope this fic doesn't turn into a Clopfic....dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Octavia_plot.png <----------------dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra.png
If it does , i won't mind reading it but .... Nevermind,It's your fic and you decide what you want to do about it!dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Celestia.png
During That time , In Equestria: dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Rainbow_Dash.png <(What's Celestia's Doing Now???)dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Luna_apple.png <(I Dunno)

Another amazing chapter, though I wasn't really expecting anything less! I love this story so far, please write chapter 4 soon, pretty please? This is so good and not many people have the extreme writing talent you possess!

1020586I actually wonder what will happen when (if) she go's back.
Will she be welcome again?
Did the ponies overthrow Luna and start a democracy?
Did Luna succumb to the nightmare again and seize the thrown?
Will she bring daniel?
STAY TUNED!

It's nice to see a fic where Celestia is really cutting loose.

Beautiful.
I loved this chapter.
It was funny when Celestia and Daniel got into a water fight.
Now it's time to play the waiting game.
But you know what? It's OK, because this story is amazing.

Ok Daniel, you're a wizard for make a Regal Princess speechless from a compliment. Good chapter as always Jaydex. I shall wait for the next installment.

dl.dropbox.com/u/12875849/reactions/crying.gif loving this story

SCREW ALREADY!
SHUT UP BRAIN!

splendid!

Awesome. There are a few minor grammar errors again, but a pretty good chapter.

Well done. I remember mentioning that your dialogue needed work and it's gotten better. I remember you also asked what in particular seemed to stick out... and I've looked over it and nothing is really "wrong" with the dialogue. However, to me the dialogue felt a little unnatural. Like it was written correctly and it was very clear as to what was going on, except at times it didn't feel like something people would say. Perfectly correct grammatically but not necessarily how people talk. I think your dialogue has gotten a lot better though. One thing in particular that I CAN point out is how often your characters seem to call each other by name. I'm not sure they need to say each others name so much. At least I don't personally call people by name so much... unless we're in a group and I need to clarify who I'm talking to.

But your work IS very good! And my complaint about your dialogue should be taken with a grain of salt and each chapter it has been getting better. Keep up the hard work!

When she tackled him I was just like
"and now they have sex "

Good chapter can't wait for the next one!

I like how you're developing the romance, but Daniel doesn't seem to have much character on his own. Maybe I'm missing something, but his only characteristics seem to be "I'm a loner" and "I'm in love with Celestia." I'd suggest spending a little more time with him, see how he interacts with other humans.

A few mistakes but I was to busy enjoying the scenery to care.

God DAMNIT! I LOVE THIS FIC, BUT I AM NEVER SATISFIED!!!

So sweet and heartwarming!

Another excellent chapter, I can see the buddings of romantic feelings beginning to form. Can't wait to see where things go. Though I'd suggest if you do plan on skipping time, give it a couple of weeks of skipping to let these feelings truly manifest.

this fic is epic. please write more asap.

and for such a fine fic you sir get 6 staches.

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Its so good i want MOAR!!!! Lol keep it going please

1020586
Well, it's in the clopfic section. So it probably will! :3

This is really good!

I am kind of hoping Daniel goes back to Equestria with Celestia. As much as I love Celestia Romance Stories I really would not want to see Celestia leaving Equestria forever. Especially considering that she would be leaving her Sister alone without the knowledge that Celestia is not coming back.

1022136
Well...
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1022875
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1020846 We have same brain? Weeirrrddd....
1023343 Dat picture

Anyway, lovely chapter. If this is going to have some clop parts, this is going to be probably my first clopfic i read and enjoyed.

1022284 I don't think so that she would leave Equestria for some time (not forever, Daniel is human, he is not capable to live for thousand years). But I don't want this to be a bittersweet story with Celestia leaving Daniel on Earth. Taking him to Equestria? Maybe yes! Why not? He can take free time from work and go on vacation to another dimension : P

Be thrilled as Celestia sits around bored! Can your heart take the suspence of the sun princess making a salad! Catch your breath...if you can find the time!

Nah, im just teasing. It was fun to see how Celestia would go about a normal day like that.

They're getting pretty familiar rather quickly.

1020287
Loved your comment and the Clapping Celestia!

1020365
More will be coming! I'm working out the details of chapter 4!

1020512
Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it!

1020584
Don't worry...I more than want to continue this! I'll be breaking some ground on Chapter 4 this weekend.

1020586
Well, it's rated mature and has the sex tag. So there will be clop, but it will be done in the same way I did "Apple Bucking with a Beauty". The clop part doesn't really get going till about 3/5 of the way through. But that should give you an idea of what to expect in this story.

1020626
I just love your enthusiasm! And I will be all to happy to work on Chapter 4! But wow, that last part of your comment!!
>>This is so good and not many people have the extreme writing talent you possess! I hardly know what to say. I didn't think my writing is that good. I know I have knack for it...but wow! "Thank you" doesn't even seem to be a fitting reply!

1020661
At this point, I'm not planning on any dealings with Equestria. That's not to say that down the road I won't have her return. But In all honesty I wasn't planning on her going back. This is sorta like the HiE story in reverse. Normally the human bolts from their life on Earth and goes to Equestria. But who knows what the future will hold for this story. After all the sky's the limit!

1020663
That's what I'm hoping to deliver in this story. Celestia being able to be her real self - showing the sides we've never gotten to see.

1020686
I am equally enjoying your enthusiasm! It fuels my drive to write this! Don't fret, the waiting game will be worth it!

1020712
Thanks a bunch for the comment! Glad to count you among my followers!

1020784
Thank you....so much! Sorry, could resist. But I appreciate the enthusiasm and enjoyed the gif!

1020846
Don't worry, the clop is coming. Though it may not happen till chatper 5. This has changed vastly from the Clopfic I originally intended it to be. So far I think it's for the best. But don't worry, there will be plenty of "fun" to come!

1020862
Thanks!

1020948
I think I'm enjoying the same aspects. Don't worry a new chapter is in the works!

1021052
Thanks for the comment. Yeah, I'll do my best to make the dialogue more down to earth.

1021157
Oh I am so with you. If only they had known each other longer. That would have made a great foreplay scene. But there are so many that want the romance to develop more on the slow side. Don't worry, I'm not going to drag it out too much longer, I promise. They should be getting much closer by Chapter 5. I planted the seeds in Chapter 3 and now in Chapter 4 they are going to grow!

1021506
Glad you're enjoying the development of the romance. Now, you got the "Loves Celestia" part. But he's not only a loner, in fact he's more lonely for companionship that he is a true loner. Plus I've illustrated that he was close with his family, works a tiring job, and has friends he hangs out with from time to time. He also has some domestic skills, is a bit of green thumb, and is generally a caring individual. And he will be interacting with other humans, I just haven't gotten to that part yet. Hope that helps him seem to have a little more character. But your suggestion is appreciate!

1021554
Is that cause you find you always want more, or is it because the story hasn't reached the "good part" yet?

1021758
Thank you!

1021779
I'll have to see what I can do, but I don't know if passing entire weeks will work. I need to brainstorm a few things. Though I was planning to have them spent a least a week getting to know each other before anything major happens. I'd drag it on longer, but along with several of the followers, I'm also getting restless. Hopefully chapter 4 will complete the setting of the stage!

1021846 & 1022083
Thank you! More will be on the way! Only one more night of work then I have a short weekend. It should allow me to get a nice start to chapter 4.

1022284
I don't currently have a plan for that, but it's not entirely out of the question either. But if I chose to go that route, it won't happen for quite some time.

1023343
Love the pic!

1023645
Then it just may be the first clopfic you'd enjoy. We'll have to see.

1024896
It's okay to poke fun. And glad you enjoyed seeing how Celestia spent her day.

1025917

I guess I did miss something.

1026087
It's no problem. I hope I didn't seem like a smart Alec or anything, I just wanted to see if you were aware of those few things. Thanks for following the story and commenting! I hope you continue to enjoy it!

Well you're welcome Jaydex, I truly meant it, almost no other story, book or Fanfiction has made me feel so immersed. The way you show the characters' emotions is just perfect and absolutely believable! I can't wait to see how Daniel and Celestia profess their love to eachother! I love this story and am always anticipating the next chapter. I'll keep the compliments coming with every chapter! Your writing will always be beautiful and unrushed, please keep it up!

1025917 It's because I always want more damnit! You write awesome chapters, but you always leave my thirst for these chapters unquenched! MOAR

Since Celestia will be spending a lot of time alone at Daniel's house, he'll have to show her the TV, yeah? I see a good bit of potential in this:

It gives Celestia some entertainment.

It gives her the opportunity to learn about the modern Earthrealm.

Watching news stations report on things like crimes and foreign hostilities could lead to a discussion of society's values and problems, thus opening up a deeper understanding of Daniels hopes and fears.

I really like this story, and it's refreshing to read a story coming so strongly from Celestia's perspective, but I'd like to see a bit more character development on Daniel's part.

1027722
You've offered some good insight. But the TV route won't be unfolding quite as you have suggested. In fact its reasoning will help with the development of Daniel's character. And in part of chapter 4, we are going to learn more about Daniel. So for you and others wandering about him, you should get some more insight shortly. Now I won't spoil what I have planned for Celestia, but she will get a chance to indulge in Earth's entertainment, culture and news. But if I say anymore I may as well put up a great big spoiler warning...and I am not going to do that. But again I appreciate the comment and your enthusiasm! Thank you!

1026485
You know, I dare say you are quickly becoming my new biggest fan! I'll continue to do my very best for you and everyone else! As for their love, I've begun some brainstorming. Hopefully things will work out nicely. The good thing is, I won't rush this, so it can continue to be good!

1026952
I'm glad you enjoy the so much, but form my standpoint it's good that I keep you wanting more. That way I always have readers eager to partake in what I have to offer. I only hope I can keep you entertained! I can hardly wait to tear into Chapter 4! It's going to be another fun write!

>>JaydexTheShadowKnight
I guess you could say that I am your biggest fan, but only because of the extreme quality of your writing and the powerful emotions you put into it. This is going to sound really weird, but am I commenting too much just to give compliments? lol

Awesome chapter! Always looking forward to more.

I chuckledthats all I have to say...This story is really going good...I can see the connections really growing

1032781
Some might say you're commenting too much, but I certainly do not. I enjoy your enthusiasm and support! Now I only hope I can prove worthy of such compliments. BTW if you fear you're posting too many comments, you can always send a PM. I enjoy getting those too!

1032820
Glad you're continuing to like the story! I'm working on Chapter 4 currently!

1034656
And to think...the best is yet to come! *insert sinister laughter here*

1039579
Glad you go to read chapter 2 and that you are still enjoying it! Chapter 3 will be waiting for you, and I am currently working on Chapter 4! Also glad you'd react in a similar manner to Daniel!

i really enjoyed this chapter alot! ^_^ Also i think you are showing celestia's goofy side well, i mean it would make since she would act in that manner after 2000 years ruling a kingdom as a princess to act like a kid when she can lol, also laughed when she desided to read of al things LotRs
And i also like how there slowly getting feelings for each other it makes it more plesent to read, unlike some that in one page go from i hate you to i love you XD anyway keep it up im really getting into this story!

1039969 haha thank ;p cannot wait to see how juicy this story gets~

1044166
Let's just say I've got a lot of "fun" planned for this story. The ironic thing is that this story was originally just going to be a clopfic with a mostly half-baked romance. But once so many of you showed interest in it. I got to thinking I should make some kind of back story as to why Celestia goes to Earth in the first place. One thing led to another and then *BAM* I end up writing this! I am still amazed just how popular this is! Oh and while things will get "juicy" I will still keep it somewhat tasteful. I don't like to make things too raunchy, if you get my meaning.