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Due to her failure in her second attempt to take Equestria, Chrysalis has lost everything and suffered severe consequences.

This story is not related to the Changeling Empire Story.

Note: I made some changes, cause I'll admit the starting chapter makes no sense.

Cover belongs to Orin331
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Chapters (22)
Comments ( 45 )

Well, let's see where this goes :trixieshiftright:

Comment posted by ARTL deleted Sep 13th, 2018

I’m intrested in it. A plot-twist that makes Thorax’s rebellion an illusion.

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That seems rather harsh. Aside from the beginning, which seems to just throw you into the fray with no apparent context, this story was rather well done. I actually enjoyed it.

This story is gruesome but I want to see more.

Since the sun and moon doesn't rotate around the planet like how it usually does in real life. You could say the planet has more than one sun and moon.

So a different sun and moon for a different location ?

Who prays that Starswirl and is companions are responsible for Chrysalis being mean and nasty. And the reason I typed this is; After seeing that their responsible for the Pony of Shadows, I want their heroics acts to reveal dark consequences.

I wish to see more, please. And learn of Starswirl meets an enemy that beaten him

In the Unkown, all creature inhabit there fight to survive while those in Equestria are protected by Faust, became soft & weak to those who fight with strength and power; those wo understood the true meaning of survival. Oh the irony, the fabrication of Harmony & Friendship will give strength to many when Harmony never understood the meaning of survive. If you don’t understand what I type. I mean in short Harmony & Peace can make others lose the will to fight to survive.

Damn… Survival in the Unknown can be a bitch and create violent minds. Explains the massive peace spread and the destruction crowded in one area.

I bet that Pupa & Flurry Heart are sisters and Cadence might guarantied will kill Shining Armor and Chrysalis. Also I wonder when will you show the Chapter of Chrysalis giving her Changelings individual minds, I bet that she did it because she had enough of blank icy eyes staring at her

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Pupa and Flurry Heart are not sisters, since Changeling Queens can lay eggs without the need for husbands. Producing and egg for an heir however require alot of magic however, which is one of the reason why Chrysalis did;t do anything between season 2 and season 6 finale.

Also Chrysalis' Changeling already possess individual minds, as she dislikes controlling mindless Changelings.

Happy to learn you add the importance of the Balance of Light & Darkness. Also I see the possibility of a future bearer that isn't a pony

I knew it before then ending and got to say very clever on the cake and spanking. That still hilarious, even if the show’s old, I still love that series.

I got some funny if you’re interested in it.

Poor Blueblood, now I feel sorry for him for being a jerk, he was mistreated by other snobs.

So Thorax’s rebellion was fabricated by Chrysalis' siblings minions. The Magic Of Friendship was actually the Power of Betrayal. Believe In Harmony so long and you can’t see the consequences of your actions. Hope the series have a villain that was created by harmony and friendship will not work this time.

Comment posted by Trimontar deleted Feb 5th, 2018

Great chapter and here's a video that might be similar to Chrysalis

All hail queen Pupa

"Drake possess not only the strength, durability and attributes of a dragon, but he also retains the abilities of a Changeling. In other words a dragon capable to using magic."

Wait does spike green fire count as his magic because then we might have another hybrid

Comment posted by titanhades70 deleted Apr 14th, 2018
Comment posted by titanhades70 deleted Apr 14th, 2018

I am still loving this story; Betrayal, Dark consequences, some things that the series is lacking.

Happy that you got your inspiration back.

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Actually I had trouble picking the Battle Forms, since I wan't the cooler and better ones of the Kings and Queens.

I might give this story a chance, at first I thought this would be just Chrysalis turning into white changeling, you know the Thorax squad and while it's sad that she died, I'm curious what happens next.

Happy that you haven’t let this story die

When s the next one ?

When will you continue the story

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Busy working on the side story

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How long will that take

Will there be more alicorns

Your story is the final straw that manage to convince me to make a account for Fimfiction, just to show you my appreciation for this story and your perseverance. congrats you earn it and here's 5 Fluttershy :yay: :yay: :yay: :yay: :yay:

Video’s gone.

Very nice story. Let see what will happen in the future

"Run!", Star Swirl screams as hundreds of Changelings starts their kamikaze strike onto the land.

TENNO HEIKA BANZI!!!

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Empire of the Rising Sun moment.

The thing that interests me the most in this story is the alicorn candidates thing. Especially since it implies that Twilight’s six closest friends will become alicorns at some point.

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