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My first fic ever so if you spot any grammar/spelling/etc. Feel free to let me know so that I may fix them immediately. (Also feel free to give me helpful criticisms, this is a big learning experience for me.)
Hope you enjoyed! Much more coming! (Expect some of the more hardcore fetishes soon)
Dude, if you already know there are haters for this sort of thing, you can't be too mad. Some fetishes are just a bit too extreme for people and its to be expected that a bunch of dickheaded elitist snobs will downvote your stuff without giving it a chance. Trust me, as a crossover writer I know.
Just so you know, colored text is a great way to get downvoted. We can already tell who is speaking, so that's just unnecessary. Same with bolded text or text in all caps.
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Thanks for the useful advice. I had no idea people had problems with it but I will definitely keep that in mind for future chapters. Would you recommend I edit this chapter and change it? Or just leave it as is?
Also: Love your stuff.
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Yeah, definitely edit this chapter. It'll help you in the long run.
Also, you should actually provide a description of what happens in the story in your description. Filling it with warnings and spoilered text that tells us nothing of the contents of the story is bad and will hurt your chances of getting the story read.
Delete this.
You don't need this at all if your story page doesn't allude to underage characters.
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Made the changes you suggested, if there's anything else, do tell. Thnx again.
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Well shit... your description actually looks pretty good now! Definitely a lot better than before.
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Thank you! Working on next chapter now.
Sooo...was this a dream or what?
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You sound like Amy from Kitchen Nightmares.
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Oh, I remember that episode!
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"All these haters attacking us online!" WE HAVE LOVE AND YOU HAVE NOTHING!"