Hello everyone!! Wanted to let you know that i have accounts on Furaffinity and Fanfiction under the name PuzzleMaster1998. I love doing puzzles, adore foxes, and favorite villain is Chrysalis.
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Who is Slendermare?
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Ponified Slenderman
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Oh, okay
this is actually getting quite good just make the chapters a liiitttle longer I am writing as story and each chapter will have at least 6k words and plan to have like 13 chapters in total i will publish it when every chapter is done and it will be hopefully a good story
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thanks. and good luck
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what is your story about?
you know...for a super powerful entity whos real life counterpart kills people the pony version is surprisingly sweet
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Yeah. Wanted to do a laid back version
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In a nutshell my story is about my oc falling in love with queen chrysalis and her returning the feeling(nopony approves at first but then they get used to her)the story is set in a futuristic sci fi equestria with the backstory behind the tech being ...ALIENS....no seriously i(my oc) explain in the first chapter that aliens crashed in equestria canterlot scientists recovered the wreckage and equestria now has stuff like from mass effect, tron, and a couple other franchises
Meh, not going to lie, kinda expected the notes to rhyme. And i felt like one a chapter would be fine, except they would be a tad longer, and would of course, rhyme.
To me that would make it seem like more effort had been put in.
hold up.... I haven't started reading it yet but this looks like it's going to be the same if not similar to the story Spikes Stalker By DARKPHANTOM13 I'll read it first before I make any assumptions
For real love this so far and I am glad I found this story
Just a minor thing is that the chapters feel really short for me if you could increase the size of them that would be amazing
Really though Well Bloody Done Author
well, I read both chapters and I have to say... it is amazing the way everything is falling into play as the story progresses I love it and I retract my earlier the stories are two separate stories good thing I read first other whys I would have started raging
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Perfect
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Thanks
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Aw shucks. Thanks
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Its ok. I didn't want them to rhyme though.
Okay seriously?
"Hmm somepony snuck into the Library, switched the notes, and could still be hiding out somewhere! Oh well guess I'll go to bed."
>_>
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Yeah. Not the best thing, buty he did look everywhere in the library.
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I'm just glad its in that section.
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Hey man. I took your suggestion for the rhyming. Hope it works for you.
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Oh my god really!? Thank you so much! I honestly cant express how happy i am at hearing that.
I just thought that it helped give it more of an air of mystery, as well as seem more like what slendermare would do.
Do you by any chance have an editor or pre reader for this story? I'd love to help out any way i can, and I'm pretty sure I could be of use to you in making this story even more bedazzling.
As well as read it before everyone else, of course.
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I don't have one. I literally asked my roommate for ideas about how he should find the notes. If you want to, you can be it.
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Yay! Y'all will need to send me a PM with links to the next chapter when its done. And probably the password to it if you've locked it.
I don't see the full note messages...
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I'm currently editing some of them. Will be done tonight.
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Okay.
So how creepystarker (yes i made that one word on purpose) is this going to get
Between the watching from afar to yandere
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He does live in a world with magic its not that far fetched to say there could be a spell to change the wording on a note
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I don't know, but no yandere.
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Okay
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Possibly a dandere then?
Great now I have the image of Slender as Hinata.
YOU THERE!! USER! when is the New chapter going to be complete? Because i dont really like it when somepony publish3s the first two chapters like a day apart and just vanishes and abandons their story
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I have to write it still. A few more days.
Can somepony explain to me why the first two chapters are only a day apart but the gap between chapter two and the non existant chapter 3 is 20 days? I have written 4 chapters of my story in that timespan i am starting to think you are either dead or abandoned the story in which case NOT AGAIN!! why do i ALWAYS WITHOUT FAIL find really good stories with chapters released frequently and the author VANISHES the day after i find it WITHOUT FAIL THAT HAS HAPPENED 4 TIMES IT SHAL NOT HAPPEN AGAIN ON MY WATCH if you cant tell i am getting quite pissed off with authors abandoning good stories RIGHT as i find them IT MUST BE RECTIFIED
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College.
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I guess thats understandable i just hope it gets released soon we are all waiting for that next chapter
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Is it really that good??
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Is the pope catholic?(rhetorical question with obvious answer)
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ok, i take that as a BIG. FAT. YES!!!
I just don't really understand why its so popular. Any ideas?
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Because its an unusual pairing and those tend to be popular and plus the well written stories are the ones with multiple chapters because then there is more time for the relationship to develop thus making it a little more believable than "hey we just met fuck me now" after all the story i am writing pairs my oc strange quark with queen chrysalis so thats a pairing that isn't that common is somepony's oc and chryssi and besides mine is going to be 13 chapters and its my first story i will post it once it is done
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Hm. That makes sense. Thanks.
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Cant wait for it.
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Same...my story is 13 chapters an each chapter has between 6k and 9k words and i am currently starting chapter 5 (i am saving the legit sexuality for chapter 10 so up til then its either jokes or not at all subtle innuendos) i will allow you to see it before it is complete i will post the link later and the early acess code is "Equine after all" in reference to the daft punk song human after all
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Yes!! Thanks. Also, i like Daft Punk as well. Favorite song by them is Harder, Better Faster Stronger
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/390550/a-strange-relationship here is my story it is FAR from complete and hasn't really been edited yet so expect it to be FULL of errors remember the early access code is Equine after all
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Its a good one. Cant wait for the last chapters. Even though I'm not a fan of Tron, its good. And, him and Mantis? Hilarious! Is this story a harem one?
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No actually the pairing of main characters is strange quark and chrysalis...general mantis is a side character who will be involved throughout the story but not directly part of the relationship... I am also pairing fluttershy and discord and by extension bringing in characters from the bride of discord timeline like fluttershy and discord's daughter screwball and their son in law mothball(one of chrysalis's sons) as well as in an unrelated timeline pairing twilight and tempest in later chapters also like how i got chrysalis hooked on stranger things in ch4? Speaking of that...like how i depicted strange quark's minscape when he talks to luna at night? I was going for the mindscape depiction from stranger things and i think the astronomy bit outside the hive was pretty good catching that supernova and discussing the previous owners of the planet(humans)
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Good idea with the mindscape. HAve to work on one for my story.
clues ideas. you don't have to use them just throwing them out there.
I can appear and vanish instantly when you know I am around.
I use the shadows to move everywhere and nowhere at once.
When criminals see my face it's the last thing they see.
when other ponies see my face they see nothing and run screaming.
your sister and everypony else believes me to be myth, folklore.
if you want to know my tale, in the book about mythological beings you just got, under the first word slender take a look.
please don't let that tale tarnish your view of me it is meant to keep ponies on the right path in life.
that all I got right now