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EquestrianTwist


I'm just a part time writer who enjoys a good story, and wants give those good stories his own patented equestrian twist

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(WARNING: This takes place after the events of the MLP Movie; if haven't seen the movie yet and don't want anything to be spoiled, wait to read this story)

Following the recent defeat of the Storm King, Fizzlepop Berrytwist, formally know as the dreaded Tempest Shadow, has retired from her life of pillaging and plunder and has decided to find herself a place to stay amongst the peaceful ponies of Equestria. However the road to reform will be long and hard it seems, as ponies still continue to watch her with untrusting gazes.

She currently doesn't have a friend in the world, except per say, the Princess of Friendship and her friends... and perhaps one other.

Grubber, her second-in-command from when she was the Storm King's commander, hasn't left her side since she begun her reform. He had been doing everything for her while she had been trying to get back on her hooves. Cooking, cleaning, organizing their house, he had been the perfect description of what Princess Twilight Sparkle would call a "Number 1# assistant", and she was quick to take pride in this. Going so far as to praise him before her new friends...

...unfortunately, a certain little dragon was in earshot at the time.

Chapters (2)
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Comments ( 15 )

Epic Rap Battles Of History!!! Spike vs Grubber... Begin!!

Twilight's got serious issues.

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Don't worry, I'm sure a book somewhere that can... ooh.

Wait, where's Starlight... did she take Trixie on her offer for a girl's night in Las Pegasus :raritywink:? Or is she and Sunburst... 'reseachering' :raritywink:?

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She's doing what she usually does when she's not present in an episode... what that is, I'll let you decide. :moustache:

Headline two days from now. "Greatest assistant in Equestria found! Raven Inkwell burns Ponyville to the ground in protest."

No matter who wins I think we can all agree Twilight lost.

Haha this is great! I can’t wait to see where it goes next.

So far, I am loving the heck out of this story. Please continue it. :pinkiehappy:

There are 3 ways to solve things when two sidekicks aren't getting along:

  1. Give them both spears, and you let them fight to the end. :rainbowdetermined2:
  2. Give them both blunderbusses, and you let them fight to the end. :ajsmug:
  3. (Rainbow Dash's idea in the chapter) :trollestia:

This was actually really fun. I hope it continues some day. :twilightsmile:

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<air horn> PAA! PAA! PA! PAAAAA! PAA!</airhorn>

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