Impregnation Incantation

StarFall825 #1 · Nov 4th, 2017 · · · Chapter 5 - The Birth ·

This is the most tame fetish fic I have ever read, nothing sexual really happened. It doesn’t even feel like a clop fic despite its fetishy-ness.

Klamnei

Klamnei #2 · Nov 4th, 2017 · 4 · · Chapter 5 - The Birth ·

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A very fun and kinky story. Was great to have this as part of the Halloween pack.

Hopelight

Hopelight #3 · Nov 4th, 2017 · 5 · · Chapter 5 - The Birth ·

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Hush, little Shade, as I tuck you in bed.
Hear my voice's magic.
Hush, little Shade, the time's come to sleep.
Here, in our home of magic.
Hush, my darling, the time's come to dream.
As you drift away, to happiness.

The Philosopher King

The Philosopher King #4 · Nov 5th, 2017 · · · Chapter 5 - The Birth ·

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What happened to the cover image?

Pacificside18

Pacificside18 #5 · Nov 5th, 2017 · · · Chapter 5 - The Birth ·

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Pulled due to NSFW Imagery violations.

Shadow Star

Shadow Star #6 · Nov 5th, 2017 · · · Chapter 5 - The Birth ·

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not bad, but a bit on the bland side.

Viper Pit

Viper Pit #7 · Nov 5th, 2017 · 1 · · Chapter 5 - The Birth ·

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i would like a sequal where she uses the shade to fight evil and stuff

Deeee-yurpitude

Deeee-yurpitude #8 · Nov 8th, 2017 · 1 · · Chapter 5 - The Birth ·

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Eh, not every fetish-garnished fic need be wall-to-wall funk, 'specially when its secondary characters are just engaging enough to make the non-kink portions flow smoothly. Matter of fact, I'll admit to half-expecting one of those Spectral Phaseout(R)-type deliveries, so the actual birth was a pleasant surprise (plus, it meshed nicely with that initial tension re: "will I survive this amorphous thing's unnerving growth spurts?" ). Besides a few typos and somewhat patchy villain motivation (one line/quote mentioning *why* Starlight hoards candy would've sufficed), this was most readable as multi-chapter kinkfics-with-some-plot (KWSP?) go.

SonicFan117DASH

SonicFan117DASH #9 · Jan 7th, 2018 · 2 · · Chapter 3 - The Shadow ·

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This is my second favorite of you’re pregnancy stories for one very good reason; verbal communication between mother and unborn offspring. I think this is one of the only stories I’ve ever read on this site that features a pregnant woman openly talking to her child before giving birth to it, and to have said child RESPOND BACK! I wish I could find other stories like this one because it, as I’ve said before, is the only one I found to have a pregger speak to her womb and the baby within capable of speaking to her in return. Oh well, “Anything’s better than nothing”, I always say!

Good job!

Luckyfanisaac

Luckyfanisaac #10 · Feb 8th, 2018 · · · Chapter 1 - The Incantation ·

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This particular tower stood as tall as Princess Twilight’s castle,
And then, she read the incantation from her book.
“I want to collect every piece of candy off of those townsfolk. Are you sure you can’t supply me the spell?
Ponk—“
“PONK!”
“Whatever!”
She gave it a very hard thought. By supplying her with her spell by tomorrow night, she’d get that bag of candy. But she wouldn’t have it in time. However, she found the alternative.
she embarrassingly admitted, “Keep forgetting about that. Anyway, WOOOO!!” (——
“Well…” the Spellcaster commented, brushing off whatever puff of spirit smoke off of her, “That couldn’t have been more random.” (——

This sentence doesn’t seem right to me but I’m not sure how to fix it.

With the bargain in place, the witch began to clean up the mess the spirit had left, mopping any cauldron water that was still on the floor.

Luckyfanisaac

Luckyfanisaac #11 · Feb 8th, 2018 · · · Chapter 2 - Impregnated ·

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She raised her hands ~~her~~ to her cleavage,
“I must contact that dirty pink ghost quickly. Before I explode!” (——
“Have…have I been hoarding candy this ~~the~~ entire time and never once eaten it?” Starlight questioned herself,

Luckyfanisaac