• Member Since 29th May, 2012
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The Legend of Derpy


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Oneshot. Gilda left Ponyville in order to escape her affections for Dash, not to nearly die in the desert, not to find an annoying little buffalo, and certainly not to fall in love with the buffalo in question. Knowing her luck, this buffalo proves to have tighter bonds to Ponyville's local daredevil than Gilda ever managed...will Gilda finally find the "right" type of love? Gilda x Little Strongheart. Yes, you heard me correctly.

Chapters (1)
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Comments ( 8 )

I blame the pairing generator. :facehoof:

My story can also be found on Fanfiction.net.

Awesome! Two one-episode characters that I really liked. Also the two characters the entire fanbase seems to manically despise for some reason.

As for the story itself, it was cute :raritywink:

I didn't know the bronies despised Little Strongheart. Gilda, yes, but not Strongheart. Thanks! :twilightsmile:

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What is this pairing generator you speak of?

Community: Would you ever do shipping? What is your favourite ship anyway?
Author: Ship? What ship? You mean like the titanic?

Needs srs edit sweep, but a nice story and nice concept.

Y1

Interesting enough but I felt that it was a bit mellow. It lacked any real emotional punch. I didn't have enough time to get invested in either character and when they fell in love it seemed sudden and awkward to me. It's alright, but it could have been much better with more time to develop the characters and their relationship.

Full review here, but in brief: the plot is about as predictable as "odd couple" shipfics get, but the pairing is interesting and "mournful song of pain, death, and lunch" is a fantastic line. Should not be rated E, though -- works with even one f-bomb cannot be.

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