Definitely a good clopfic to me! It's certainly something I haven't seen before, so that's a big plus. And this may be just me, but I'm hoping there will be a biiit of an error in the separation spell.
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Not the usual Cakecest.
I like it.

This was great.

Going forward, I would like to see them talking to each other about the differences between themselves, and how each other's body parts feels, as a stranger in each other's bodies.

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Thanks for the complement dude. I appreciate it.

Btw

There was some clunky wording

Can you point to any specific examples of where you thought it came off as clunky? I'll gladly go back and edit.

I'm hoping they will eventually do some self-fucking, like derpibooru
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Or perhaps thinking with portals,
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While that is a good idea, I've already got the whole fic planned out in my head and that's not part of it. For one thing, hard dicks can't bend like that. And about the portal idea, Pumpkin just had her first sexual experience and Pound has never used unicorn magic at all. I seriously doubt either of them would know a spell like that.

Besides, that idea already exist in another clopfic
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/355432/removable

Why would I want to write about something that someone else has already covered way better than I could? I don't mind writing clop, but I try to make it as original as possible.

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I don't mind writing clop, but I try to make it as original as possible.

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