Swearing and Blood
The Night Wind is a free ship, sailing the skies. It has endured many trials, but a dragon attack will push it to the fullest. It's survival now depends on its captain and crew.
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Comrade Bagel Muffin
I'm the reason when you search Quibble you'll find Scootaloo too. PM me if you want to talk about anything one on one. Well I finally set up a patreon...Hazaa???
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Good concept, but you need some better grammar and punctuation. Shining Armor is spelled with one “n”, by the way.
Story was good, just somewhat rusty or unpolished. You just need some help refining and proofreading. I suggest you look into the “Looking for Editors” group, if you haven’t already.
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Merci beaucoup.
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De rein. Tu es francais? Or just mannerisms?
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J'ai etudie francais a la universite. Vous etez vous francais?
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“J'ai etudie francais a la universite. Vous etez vous francais?”
Swear I’m not using GTranslate: I (as in, you) studied French in college. Are you (as in, me), French?
I’m not sure that there’s supposed to be two “vous” in there. Is there?
Took 3 years in high school, but if the fact that this isn’t in French isn’t enough of a clue, I did what any normal person does and forgot it soon after
. I still have the pronounciation down to a T, though.
Occasionally, I’ll understand a simple bit and suddenly everything will come back to me in an instant. Most of the time, though, I’d need to sit down and go over the basics again in order to remember.
Loved it!
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Merci beaucoup, what about it did you enjoy?
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The amount of detail you used! But it was the way it was distributed. You didn't shove it down our throats. You wove it into the story. And it was also a really emotional story for being 1.5k words!
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Merci beaucoup