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Fireball1982


Comments ( 17 )

I liked this!

Welp, if you saw this coming, raise your hand*Hand risen*...

Yuss, we need more of this!

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I totally saw this coming, simply because I've been in the fandom long enough to know how things go.

8513176 I know. It's just painful that I knew it would happen(or rather, I hate being right about this)

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The only thing I was expecting different, was Starlight utilizing the spell on herself while leaving Sunburst unaffected.

8513228 There would be many, many problems/issues there had that been the case.

Twilight’s eyes lingered on the pretty magician’s backside as she departed ‘It was me who was leaking, not the castle, and I think I’m starting to again…’ her friendly smile slipped into a bit of a smirk, she’d have to take a peak back into that room in a few minutes to see how that little meeting was going, she would have to remember to bring a mop this time. Maybe she could invite herself in to play a few games with them too…

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Also, Twilight to Sunburst, Starlight, and Trixie:

I wish playing Monopoly would get me laid like this.

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Perhaps, but that would certainly be par for the course where Starlight is involved in something.

8513750 Well, you got me there.

This was a good read, I really liked having Sunburst and Starlight doing 'it' together as foals, keep up the good work.

bout time someone made this, only took a week. thanks!

I'm glad this seems to have been well received, I am tentatively working on a great and powerful sequel :trixieshiftright:
This is my first works posted on here, I wanted something not serious to see how it went, so please post any comments about improvements or errors.

Thanks all!

A very cute little read. Good emotion on display and I like how you played with perceptions.

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