Shining Armor Is Doomed

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Shining Armor loses Twilight in the busiest mall in Equestria and has one hour to find her before it’s too late. His life is basically over.

Spiritual successor to The One Pony You Never Prank

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zaku666

zaku666 #1 · Oct 29th, 2017 · 1 · ·

good so far
have a track

SuperPinkBrony12

SuperPinkBrony12 #2 · Oct 30th, 2017 · 1 · ·

Ooh, that's a parenting nightmare right there! Losing your child in a major shopping mall and not knowing where they are. Shining Armor better find Twily fast, or he's in deep doo-doo!

pahnazd

pahnazd #3 · Oct 30th, 2017 · 1 · ·

Twilight, that was evil. But the best kind of evil.
That disappearing act was a bad kind of evil, though.

Now I'm imagining Shining running around the mall yelling "TWILIGHT" the same way Ethan (from Heavy Rain) was running around and yelling "SHAWN"

Star-Corrsin

Star-Corrsin #4 · Dec 10th, 2017 · · ·

This was a ok story maybe a bit cheesy with how cadence responded to shining about the missing purple unicorn but what I feel was a little bit ehhh worse was that shining acted quiet the opposite of how he would seem to be.

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