All Derpy had to do was deliver the mail it was really that simple, on her way home there was a storm and wanting to be helpful, of course she investigated it. Only to be pulled into it, and ending up in this strange new place where she found out she was a Princess. She and her friends saved this place from the jaws of evil many times over. She was really confused about this and had to find a way home!
Rated Mature for mentions of rape, enslavement. Nothing is actually described in detail but just putting this here as a caution. If you are not comfortable with such subjects, walk away now.
Added tags- Romance.
Chapters (13)
i believe in you derpy
Hmmm... You have my attention
Oh boy, whoever that was can't end well for Derpy or anyone else for that matter.
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Indeed, Derpy's in trouble now! Glad you are enjoying it so far. <3
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Thx! Who doesn't love Princess Derpy
Like where this is going
DERPY FOR THE WIN
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I take it you enjoyed this chapter? :)
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i did
That's my Derpy, even in fear she still willing to do the right thing & help those in need, especially the ones that embrace the hate.
why do I get the feeling that this world is just a world thats full of displaced ponies?
I actually felt so bad for Midnight, all those years of abusing & capturing slaves, all because he lost someone close to his heart in a gruesome & graphic way is heartbreaking. It doesn't make it ok at all for what he would do & become, but I do feel for the poor (now former) evil bastard.
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Thank you. He was one of the first Oc's I made for MLP. Electric Flare was the first but a lot of people didn't like her cutie mark being an earth pony that could do plasma so that's when I made Midnight Star who has come a long way from his beginnings.
Midnight Star and Emma Flower
https://daceria.deviantart.com/art/Midnight-Star-and-Emma-Flower-593108466
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Wow they look incredible. Can't wait to see more of Midnight's road to redemption along with Derpy & hopefully more on his background with Emma.
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Thanks! And Snow Heart is the picture I use for my avatar if you wondered what she looks like. xD.
Well more will come eventually but I have to work on a special project before starting work on Chapter 5.
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I was curious why Lyra had her colors changed on your avatar.
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Yeah it was originally Lyra but i edited it to be my Oc probably why it looks like Lyra. lolz.
out of curiosity why the sex tag?
oh please be like the old man jenkins where he screams to get off his lawn
Hmmm... Quite a new edition to the team, this Heart Stripes is. The way she nuzz Derpy after she rescue her, got me think that she may have developed feelings for her, if so I ship it!
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In all honesty it was just to be safe considering one of the previous chapters had mentions of rape and enslavement but I suppose that could count as "Dark" too? I'll edit it if you think it's not necessarily. But you never know what might happen, so it might be safer to keep it just in case. *shrugs*
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Wow did NOT expect that, heh most stories I have seen with Derpy are light hearted. And the reason I asked about the sex tag, is I tend to avoid clop fics, and didnt wanna start reading something only to suddenly find out it was/had clop. I will most likely give this story a read here in a bit (after I am fully awake, I just woke up a few minutes ago XD)
oh please let heart strips follow derpy to her world
Emma's alive!? Well slap a donkey & call me Bertha, I didn't see that coming at all & neither did Midnight, that poor s.o.b. went evil & crazy for nothing!
Also....
I called it! Heart has feelings for our little Derpy! A shame that Derpy doesn't have the same feels for her, but its understandable since she needs to focus on getting home, however I must still ship them together!
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Mwhahaha. Oh and if you check out my new blog, you'll see an awesome ms paint reference for our little lovely lady Heart Stripes xD.
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Already did, she's glorious
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Thanks! Obviously she's my worlds version of Rarity, but I'm still working on a more detailed back story for her.
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Yeah I kinda figured that out when she refused to cross that bridge.
DERPY!!! *adds this to favourites and likes*
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Thanks so much, I hope you enjoy my story as well!
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Yes, I did enjoy it very much!
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how will derpy get home
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Only time will tell....
*evil laugh*
Glad you are enjoying the story!
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thank you for writting it
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You're welcome. Sometimes it's the most simple ideas, that can be the most fun and entertaining.
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like what if trixie was a centaur
Oh my, from a big monster chase to possibly finding this world's version of Fluttershy !? Hmmm... I wonder what world's version of Twilight look like? Excellent job on ch. 7, it was worth the wait & I love how Heart isn't gonna give up on winning Derpy's heart (no pun intended).
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Thanks! I hated making you guys wait so long, so hopefully it doesn't take me almost a whole month to write chapter eight.
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If it does, I know the result is gonna be glorious!
Sebria kinds of reminds me of some country in Africa and i think that Twinkle Star will be very studious, kind of like moon dancer. Hope you keep this series going! :)
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Without spoiling anything it was kind of a mix of elements. Blending in Sadle Arabia by the turbans the vendors are wearing, to how very desert like it feels. Oh I'm already planning the next chapter, just gotta keep going back and forth from this to Magic and Games so I can keep with hopefully weekly updates on at least one of my stories. I'm glad you like the story so far though!
1. Worth the wait & 2. Heart, once again trying to win Derpy's love, this time with the spa
I do hope heartstripes is able to go with her love
It lives & we finally meet this world's AJ! That moment at the end with Heart was very emotional, I do hope her prayer gets answer, when this is all over.
This was a massive update
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So you enjoyed it then?
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I did but it did take a while to read
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Understandable. Glad you are enjoying it! I'm afraid it's only going to get longer from here though. I'll try to keep it to a reasonable amount of words though.
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I do hope that Derpy makes it back to dinky
What a way to upload a big chapter, but dear God I wasn't expecting this much chaos! I admire what Heart tried to do, but she needs to understand the difference between "I'll do anything your my love" & stupidity, cuz she's suffering more than Derpy!