And all your friends will be there with smiles on their faces.
The dusty tome showed you how to enter the Lands of Dream. You learned the ritual and ventured out with your mind to explore the astral realms.
But you’ve lost your way, and hidden dangers lurk around you. How will you ever get home?
Your only hope may be to trust a stranger.
This story is an exercise in positive visualization, narrated by Luna with you as the subject. It was written for the June 2017 Writeoffs, where it came in seventh. The Luna painting is by FidzFox.
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Author’s comment. This was an interesting experiment, and I hope you will enjoy it. It has been slightly modified from its original draft.
Great!
This story was absoluty astounding. The level of detail you used, the beautiful imagery, I would call it a masterpiece.
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Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it.
Quite an interesting tale. A great use of 2nd person.
She chortles in her joy.
Too bad I had to wake up. I liked that lightsaber.
A fascinating experiment. Still, with the description of what the perspective character would be seeing for themself, it feels more like Luna's telling a story than anything. Perhaps a counterintuitive bedtime story for Flurry Heart, or a misguided but heartfelt attempt to lead a roleplaying session. That being said, this was a great deal of fun, especially the failure to fly. Thank you for it.