Jesus Christ, this is a masterpiece

dear GOD!!! 👌👈👍

This story is great! The focus changed a bit too much and quickly for me to clop to it but you made up for it with the subject matter.

that was so dame hot!

Great. One improvement point though is that I wished Velvet was more prominent. Nevertheless it's really hot.

*reads the chapter title*

He blushed quite fiercely as Twilight’s watched Cadance blowing his rock hard stallionhood, her eyes wide with lust, and maybe a little interest.

That should be either "Twilight watched" or "Twilight's eyes watched".

Night Light kept himself hilted into his step-daughter’s throat for a few moments before pulling back, just to have a look at her face.

I think you meant "daughter-in-law".

Not really a fan of dominatrix-style Velvet, but this was a really good read.

uh c'mon why do people like impregnation so crazily that all the mares had to get knocked up, even one who didn't want to :p