• Member Since 24th Aug, 2016
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Maddie Koester


Hello! My name is Maddie, I'm mad about shipping, and I love to write! Sometimes my ships go a little to far!

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Meet Platinum Streak and Shining Feather two foals whose lives intertwine thanks to friendship. But when the two foals learn that their mothers have a long hatred between them, everything goes downhill. With both having different dreams and mothers who hate each other, will their friendship last? Or will it become something more?

Chapters (27)
Comments ( 10 )

Hi there, congrats on your first fic being published! Apart from the first three chapters being a bit short and some minor grammar mistakes, it's pretty good! I'll be keeping a close eye on this, so keep up the good work! :scootangel:

Thank you for your support! And I can’t believe you read my story, I’ve read some of yours. Let’s just say I’m a fan. :pinkiehappy:

Nice cover art! I really like what you did with PS and SF. And I can't wait to write the chapter where they get their cutie marks. 😀

I can’t wait either! :raritywink:

If Platinum Streak and Shining Feather were voiced, what would they sound like?

I don’t honestly know! I’ve never thought about that before! :twilightblush:

"What are you gonna do about it? Make some amazing machine that can kill me?" *proceeds to build 15 story tall tripod war machine armed with heat ray* "whos laughing now BITCH!? *meanwhile across town*
UUUUUUULLLLAAAAAAAA!!! *bullies look over to see monstrous tripod striding towards them in the distance* "WHAT THE HELL IS THAT THING!! *proceeds to shit themselves in horror as heat ray charges* 12 SECONDS LATER "FINALLY I DONT HAVE TO DEAL WITH THEM ANYMORE!!"

Oh my god, your comment is awesome! It totally made my day! :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

You reply to comments by moving your mouse over to the right hand side of the comment you want to reply to and clicking on the >> that appears. What is that pink thing around Platinum's eye?

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I'm not stupid. I know how to reply to comments, I just get really excited when someone comments on my story. The 'pink thing' is a spot, if you've forgotten Platinum's father is Pipsqueak, who is (so far in the show) the only spotted pony. And Platinum inherited a spot from his dad but it's pink because Platinum's mom is Diamond Tiara. You can see the spot in the cover art.

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