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Absolution


Short bio huh? I didn't know there was such a thing

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After her second loss to Twilight Sparkle, Trixie has moved on, done the hard yards, and worked to be the best magician Equestria has ever seen. A small altercation with Spitfire, captain of the Wonderbolts, gives Trixie reason to question why they have "The Greatest Show in Equestria"


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Takes place before Season 6, (as the idea was spawned around S4 and written in pieces, scrapped and re-written countless times since)
Initially was going to be a multi-chapter story involving the two, but I don't think I'm capable of writing something like that.
Comments, suggestions and ideas welcome, let's have at it.

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Comments ( 1 )

I really liked this, you characterised both leads well, giving them each some bite.

Also, while Trixie was mentioning the displays being repetitive, I was admiring how you'd written some of the best Wonderbolt routine descriptions I'd ever read, being both creative and easy to visualise.

The coat being Spitfire's grandmother's was a really nice touch too.

Thanks for writing this :twilightsmile:

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