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RuinQueenofOblivion


Dashite forever!

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This story is a sequel to How We Found Love


Scootaloo and Sweetie Belle have been friends for longer than they have been Crusaders. Scootaloo recently realized she was developing feelings for her friend, and on urging from her aunts she admits the truth to Sweetie.

Now that that's happened, what will happen next? Will Sweetie return the feelings? What else will happen?


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Chapters (3)
Comments ( 33 )

Ah young love... Cute as it is, there's always going to be a few bumps in the road.

8508288
That was fast.

Also, you're welcome.

Now that I have read it; Nicely done. Looking forward to more.

8508356 Yeah, I have a lot of free time...

Scootaloo looked down at the papers, the scene looked like it was when Uplift and Chrysanthemum were finally going to admit their feelings for one another, which just made here more flustered. I couldn't believe of all the things we could've had to read together we were having to read a love scene, it was like some higher power was doing this to make my life difficult.

Enjoying the story so far, but just wanted to point out this bit where the story ends up turning into first person. You probably want to fix that.

Keep up the good work!

8508361 That's the second time I've accidentally done that in a fic, I think writing Fallout: Equestria fics (which are all in first person) is affecting my ability to write in the third person...

Not a bad start, but I feel like Scootaloo confessed a little too soon, before there was a chance for real build up.

8508693
With her Aunts helping her the way they did and the practice she got from reading the play lines it makes sense that she might have had the courage to go through with it sooner. This is also a long time friend of hers as well. It felt natural to me even if it was a bit fast. The parts in the play felt a little contrived but worked well for the humor of it.

8508717 Yeah, I admit the play was a bit contrived, I just felt like adding it.

Awwww this is so Cute!!!!!:heart::heart: Can't wait to read more of this!!! and her Aunts are goals!!!

-Ashley

8509440 Glad you like it, and goals?

8509442
Well they are so freaking cute together.

"Yeah, I know what you mean, I remember my first crush on a filly," Lofty said with a chuckle. "I was just a little older than you are now and she, well, she didn't exactly say yes either. Still, you just have to give Sweetie time."

Wonder if that filly was Holiday? Anyways, all speculations aside, this was a really great chapter. The highlight had to be Rarity and Sweetie's conversation. Odd though, you'd have thought Dash would have given some advice to Scootaloo as well... Did you think about doing that, and just cut that out of the final chapter or was it something else entirely?

8516794 Eh, I could have but I decided to go with her aunts, maybe later.

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Yeah, maybe. Besides, I think her aunts were a better choice for giving advice given that they're married so they'd know quite a lot more about the trials and tribulations of love in general, and I love seeing them get page-time anyways.

8516802 Yeah, exactly, Rarity worked fine for Sweetie given her, well I'd say experience with love but Rarity has terrible luck with love.

8516810
That would be putting it mildly.

8516812 Maybe she'll have better luck with Applejack.

A first date already? Not for nothing, but I feel like they're moving a little fast, especially since they haven't really taken time to sort out their feelings yet.

8517026 Well, I might actually wait a few days before that, right now they're more just talking.

Comment posted by Thatguywiththeface deleted Oct 29th, 2017

Nice to see this continuing. I do wonder now what's going to happen between Rarity and AJ. The show made them out to be straight with the Blueblood thing and then the other stallion they were both trying for.

8519283 Actually there’s some odd subtext between the two in the show that suggests something more.

But really I threw out being 100% like the show with ScootaBelle.

I enjoyed this chapter! Can't wait for more!

Soooo this is cute, but you should totally do a spin-off story about Rarity asking out Applejack!! xD

8542866 Maybe sometime I will, but this is already a spin-off so that would be a spin-off of a spin-off.

Excuse me a moment. Runs to the other side of the planet so nobody can hear me squee on how cute Scootaloo and Sweetie are. ...Okay, I'm good now.

So, what else is gonna happen?

8543258 Stuff, stuff is gonna happen... there's still about 3 chapters left to go.

Hm. It was probably not what you were going for, but it kinda felt like Rarity was pressuring Sweetie into saying yes. :applejackunsure:

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