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Sunset won't wear pants.

Twilight has to convince her otherwise.

Their love can only blossom.

In exposure to the world.

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Comments ( 22 )

Might want to slap the Equestria Girls tag on this.

Our spices are born naked

That should be "species".

The grammar and such could use some work, but it's not a bad story or concept by any means. It gave me a good chuckle.

This was... I don't know. Strange and whatnot.

She's also ripped Twilight's clothes and did it with her in public.

Goddamnit B

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I'm falling into absurdity. Please help.

That was...something. Nothing like i imagined.

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Tell jack I say hi

Sunset leaned back, crossing her arms, and raising a single eyebrow—like that one gif from that one thing.

Nothing short of a magnum opus. Well done, you weirdo.

This was stupid, but I still found a good amount of enjoyment from the absurdity. The typos added some flavor to the writing, since they popped up at the most inconvenient times.

An example will be as follows:

Twilight's eyes remained squinted on her, leaning forward by an inch, taking something long and slender between her lips, and began to suck. She had never drunk sweet teat before.

Should be sweet tea, but that would only make the paragraph all the more worse. Having it stay as sweet teat makes it significantly more humorous.

Those pant wearing barbarians!

da fuq did i just read?

*Throws the someway palpable fic to the ground, the piece of data fragmenting into bits upon collision with the ground*

ANOTHER!

Just the right bit of randomness to cheer my chaotic day. Thank you for that :twilightblush:

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De nada.

“So as I was saying, Twilight,” Sunset began, putting her one leg over the other. “We are both women of logic so long as it maintains our self-interest. If you can present a good reason as to why I should start wearing pants, I will concede and do just that.”

THIS IS A RATIONALFIC NOW. >:]

You used women (plural) instead of woman (singular) a couple of times.

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Huh? Oh! Thanks for the save.

you were bored when you wrote thi... weren't you? xD

Sunset was then arrested for public indecency.

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