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Diamond Tiara visits Twilight Sparkle to apologize for what she did during the Cutie Mark Crusaders’ Twilight Time session.  Unfortunately, an accident happens and when Diamond Tiara gets home, she turns into a colt.  Now he must live his life as a colt until Twilight can find a spell that will turn him back into a filly.  Overtime, Diamond Tiara, now going by the name 'Diamond Gold', learns what colts like to do and soon learns that it doesn’t matter who or what you are.

Rated G.

Chapters (18)
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So, how did Diamond Tiara get turned into a colt by having books land on her and being teleported home?

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The books falling on Diamond Tiara’s head didn’t do anything. Twilight just wanted to return Diamond Tiara home safely after a bunch of books fell onto her head. So, when Twilight cast the teleportation spell, something went wrong with the spell. The transformation ended up being a side effect to the teleportation spell.

I really like it so far. More soon, please! :pinkiehappy:

What does Diamond Tiara sound like, as a colt?

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His voice is similar to Chipcutter’s.

This story continues to be interesting. Keep it up! :pinkiehappy:

“So, Diamond Gold,” Silver Spoon said as soon as they arrived. “What do you want to do tonight?”

"The same thing we do every night, Silver. TRY TO TAKE OVER THE WORLD!!!" :pinkiecrazy:

“Of course, we’re all different colors. Boys can like pink too, you know.”

Fun fact: not so very long ago, pnk was a "masculine" colour!

“I have Pony Crossing, Colt-Man, and Mare Dug,” Silver Spoon listed.

So Animal Crossing, He-Man and Dig Dug, I take it. Pretty diverse array of consoles, there.

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Actually, Colt-Man is Pac-Man.

“I’m…becoming…a pony?” Spike choked.

“It’s too dangerous to go into the woods alone,” Twilight responded.

Take this! :derpytongue2:

“Don’t worry,” said Thunderlane, who walked toward Twilight. “I’ll watch.”

(In character for my PonySona) Hey! Thunderlane! How's my favourite cousin?

Am I really still a girl? I mean, I’m pink! Is it wrong for a boy to be, or even like, pink?

Why, no! Not so long ago pink what's considered a masculine color! Fun fact!

“Y-yeah, about that,” he said nervously. “You see, I get a little stage fright when I’m performing. I’m a student at Hoofer Steps’ Dance Class and I’ve been trying to become a better dancer and I’ve been a great student. However, ever since I started taking dance lessons, I’ve been worrying that I would mess up and get laughed at for tripping or missing a move.”

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Nice story, but i think that you could have done better in my opinion. For my taste the story goes a bit more smothly and cause of that you wasted a bit potential. For example i think that most ponies are a bit to accepting, like Spolied Rich for example. I understand that you want a peacefull ending, but maybe put a bit more drama into it. Also i think that DT/DG should struggle a bit more, before she comes to tearms with they situation she is in.

What i really liked is that you gave two different endings, not many autors do that by similar stories, but i also think that they are a bit to close to each other.

All in all it was good work and please thinks at least about my words.

Kind regards SW

Pinkie Pie hid behind the schoolhouse, giggled a bit, and then ran off.

He invoked the Pink One!:raritydespair:

“No,” Diamond Gold replied. “I’m scared. What if they don’t accept us? What if they haven’t moved on with the Twilight Time incident we pulled last week?”

It's worth a try. The worst they can say is no.

Okay, The worst they can say is something like F-Off, but you get the idea.

“Wait, we already have our cutie marks,” Diamond Gold said.

WAIT.Didn't he/she lose that one upon the change?

"I understand what you're going through. When I was turned into a colt, I was initially overjoyed about the fact that I can stay in Ponyville forever. But then I began to have nightmares over the fact that my lifespan was shortened because I was turned into a pony. Trust me, you're not the only pony to be scared about changes. I'm sure that a lot of ponies around Equestria that have suffered changes and are going through the same problems.

That said, if Granny Smith is any indication, ponies have a rather... Extensive lifespan.

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