It's Halloween in Canterlot Heights and spooky fun is in the air. Indigo Zap receives an exclusive copy of the short film My Best Friend's a Zombie her older brother made for a film class. So she and some of her friends decide to invite themselves over to and spend the night at Sour Sweet's house (despite them not asking permission beforehand and her already being sick in bed with a cold) to watch it on her new TV.
However, some accidental underage drinking (courtesy of some "mocktails") a blackout and a sick Sour Sweet's fluctuating emotions lead the girls to believe that their friend has turned into a zombie and they must try to stop her.
A completely random story that just popped into my head. Cover art drawn by me.
Rated T for mild language, drinking, and a bit of horror-comedy.
This has some lovely moments. The group chat conversation was definitely the highlight.
This line seemed a bit too on-the-nose though:
Not because it's Sour being, well, sour, but because she's playing Exposition Fairy.
Looking forwards to more of it, especially once Sonata gets more involved, and triply so if her sisters make an appearance.
its a great story so far. When will the next chapter be up do you think?
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It could be a little while because school gets in the way.
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ok
Is My Best Friend's a Zombie a real short film?
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It's a fictional one.
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You know how this fic is in the "Wishes for a TvTropes page" folder? Well, I was checking up on the fics in that folder to see if anyone else had to wait as long if not longer than I'm waiting for my fics to get a Tropes page. While I already did this somewhere last month (or maybe the month before it, IDK) I'd thought I'd check up again to see if there have been any changes. While I'm still waiting for my fics to get a page, I do believe this is yours right here:
https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Fanfic/SourSweetsAZombie
Thought I might inform you so you can move the fic out of the "Wishes for a TvTropes page" folder.
PS: I've also taken the liberty of including the fic in the "Comedy", "Equestria Girls", "Random" and "Slice of Life" folders.
...is that a reference to the spongebob episode?
This looks like a fun start.
Let the hilarity commence.
Though one thing. I might suggest putting a section break between these two bits,
since you're changing scenes there.
Oh my God. XD
The ending of this chapter was hilarious. XD
This was a good silly read. Admittedly the Harry Potter jokes in the previous chapter were a little too random for me, but still, this was pretty fun. XD