My alternate/kinda extended took on a scene between Capper and Rarity from the MLP 2017 movie.
Cover Art from the MLP 2017 movie novel version
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Oh my Luna the fluff is real here! My heart!
Enjoyable to read, but there are a few mistakes within you you be aware of. First of all,
But then, she would have these random bursts of where he would just surprise him out of nowhere.
"he should be she"
and one other thing I noticed was this line: Every time the white unicorn would design a dress for some mare to wear, she could beautiful because the client in the dress feels beautiful.
Take out "beautiful"
Those are the only errors I can see, hope this is helpful! Keep up the good work.
oh my goodnesssss
it's so wonderful and cute
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Just fixed all those errors, thank you so much for your comment and your critique^^ It was very much appreciated ^^
8510294
No problem, as a writer it's harder to see your own mistakes than someone else's. I'm horrible at editing my own work but pretty decent at looking over other's pieces.
Hmmmmm, interesting.
Not bad.
Capper group here
https://www.fimfiction.net/group/212987/capper
Hm.
Hoped it would continue were the movie left of :(
I just love this story so much more than the scene of the actual movie since this one gives more depth to Capper and Rarity's relationship. Also there's a Capper Character button now you can add to the story.
Hope you write so more CapperXRarity pieces, I just adore them!!!
Rarity meets a guy and doesn't treat him as if he's a servant or a 'defective mare'
WHAT NEW SPORE OF MADNESS IS THIS?
I felt like that was like a reference
Well she is the element of generosity that is kind of like her thing but even without that that she was still due these things for other ponies and creatures
Of course Pinkie Pie well State the obvious good job Pinkie Pie
Oh shoot he's here
I would say this is a pretty nice story and a very turn of event so capper invited the ponies into his house which his original plan was about to sold them so he can pay his debts but then suddenly Rarity wanted to do something for him which that was pretty nice of her but he never expected this kind of generosity from anybody especially Rarity and he never felt something like this for a long time and I like the moment between those two but then Twilight told them the information of the hippogriffs and they need to get going but got interrupted when the creature name Verko showed up and tried to take them away and what makes things worse Tempest showed up as well and capper did everything he could to protect them but they were too strong for him and already was devastated but they had to get going I'm sure they will see each other again this was a pretty nice story kind of wish if there was a aftermath of that but this was good keep up the good work